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The Journey (Motto)

Like the tortoise, be gentle, take small steps – go far Inspired by Brian Strand's (Motto/Monuku) contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/28/2009 2:23:00 PM
Made me chuckle at the little tortoises legs, truthfull statement if ever i heard one, excellent Krista>>James
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Date: 7/26/2009 8:05:00 AM
Good message in this poem. And, sometimes it is just one step at a time. Good luck in the contest! Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/26/2009 1:07:00 AM
So true Krista.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/25/2009 2:19:00 AM
A very well written monoku possessing very sage advice. Krista, it is a pleasure to have read for you and I thank you for your welcome comments on my poem. God Bless, always, Adell
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Date: 7/24/2009 11:32:00 AM
this is a good monuku. chek out some of my poems
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