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The Journey

With wide eyes I stumble as I am pushed along by a fellow passenger…on the dusted covered roads… I whimper to myself… The steam billows along the icy metal railroad tracks… I arrive at this gigantic steaming monster that looms above my tiny body…I shudder as I am transfixed by the sight of it…It’s just a steam engine someone shouts… and I have no doubt… it is what he says… dark and brooding it stares down at me… The steam billows along the icy metal railroad tracks… As I plop down in the soot covered seat I think I glimpse a shadow in the dark night… I pull my eyes away from the sight for I am distracted by the sound of the horn blaring… I feel it piercing my ear drum just slightly… The steam billows along the icy metal railroad tracks… Holding tight to my bag I cringe as I hear loud footsteps approach my small cabin…The door swings open… “Ticket!”he screams… The steam billows along the icy metal railroad tracks… I scramble through my belongings as they are scattered on the dirty wooden planks… out of breath and with a shaky hand I reach forward and hand the large man my ticket…His icy stare lingers along my small hand with suspicion… The steam billows along the icy metal railroad tracks… Time stands still as my heart beats so fast…waiting for him… to take his leave… The steam billows along the icy metal railroad tracks… For the contest: Railway Journeys 1-15-15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/1/2015 1:55:00 PM
MEG, CONGRATULATIONS on your RAILWAY JOURNEY win *ALWAYS* SKAT
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Meg Anderson
Date: 2/1/2015 2:07:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/28/2015 7:52:00 AM
excellent pen meg beautifully painted
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Date: 1/28/2015 5:53:00 PM
Liam, hi. Thank you. This one was more of a challenge as I wanted to create more of a story. I could of kept going but I also wanted to leave it hanging.
Date: 1/26/2015 11:54:00 AM
Delightful except for that big handed man!! He gave me the creeps . . . may all your journeys be filled with much love and adventure!! I am going through Meg word withdrawal . . . .you need to post something for me to read!! 7
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Date: 1/26/2015 12:16:00 PM
Oh my dear David, you are too funny! I haven't been inspired lately to write. That's when I write. But since you are going through withdrawal I will have to think if something! You are so kind and sweet. I shall ponder on it just for you! Meg
Date: 1/25/2015 11:58:00 PM
Nice narrative write, congrats on the win,
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:54:00 PM
Dear Sir, thank you. This was a fun challenge.
Date: 1/25/2015 3:45:00 PM
Such a descriptive write - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:55:00 PM
Jan. You are sweet. This took me to new places.
Date: 1/25/2015 2:19:00 PM
Meg , very descriptive story, congratulations on your win, and 7. Blessings eve
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Date: 1/25/2015 3:27:00 PM
Awe thank you. I enjoy writing for contests! It gives me lots of ideas.
Date: 1/25/2015 1:44:00 PM
lovely pen Meg congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 1/25/2015 1:54:00 PM
Awe thank you! I had writing this one!
Date: 1/17/2015 9:02:00 PM
There goes my fond memories of train journeys! LOL Loved this story Meg
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Date: 1/18/2015 7:18:00 AM
Lol Arthur, well this one is set in the Early 1900's where it was more scary than fun. But I have never been on one and have always dreamed of taking a long train ride across the US and stay in a beautiful cabin. And gaze out at the colorful countryside. Maybe someday I will. Thanks. Meg
Date: 1/17/2015 7:46:00 AM
This is an excellent write Meg, I hope this does well for you in the contest. (Poems often tell stories that is a good thing. Where can I get me one of those counterfeit train tickets)
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Date: 1/17/2015 8:13:00 AM
Lol. At your local train station. You are kind thank you!

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