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The Journey

It slams And impacted instantly Hoarded like gold The rib to my side Aching in its stirrups like Adam Swallowing hard and dispersing A fickle attempt to blend into the walls And edge a conquest, those beautiful red planes Smashed. A man half ferocious, half dead His Mussolini smile and little left of his gait Detonation Like canaries in deep mines, we slip from our perches Slowly we breathe, heavy paper bags Illuminating like so many zeppelins The thick carbon smell hanging like dust Free to roam, though essentially just cattle Inexorable we branch and explode ourselves Feeling like Eve as the bell chimes A forceful amputation, it felt like abortion Settled and quiet and then blown to the stars Days snapping Like matches, struck then useless Emerging half a world away and ages older Renewed in my old age and wiped Pure by the smoke and the bombs Precious as diamonds and pure as an infant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/19/2009 9:46:00 AM
Miss you, Bugsy =[
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Date: 8/14/2009 5:58:00 PM
Ladybug! If you're on get on yahoo!
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:58:00 PM
There are so many amazing phrases in this... "Aching in its stirrups like Adam" "Free to roam, though essentially just cattle" "settled and quiet and then blown to the stars" I love it. Absolutely gorgeous, dear Bugsy. Miss you. KCOG =]
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Date: 8/11/2009 10:47:00 AM
Good afternoon Nathaniel. I just finished entering some of the contests going on here at the Soup. Now I am going to read some of the poems written here. Thank you for sharing yours. Look through the contests maybe you might want to enter some of them also if you haven't already. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2009 5:38:00 AM
I like the days snapping like matches. Nicely written. Sara
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Date: 8/11/2009 3:31:00 AM
You have well described our journey through life and the obstacles we face. As we get older, we do feel a sense of renewal as we accept the reality of things we cannot change and learn to concentrate on those we can. Excellent write, Nathaniel! Love, Carolyn
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