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November 20, 2023

Contest :Sonnet-Ku-Ku

Sponsored by : Charles Messina

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The JOURNEY began a long time ago, traversed meandering lone LIFE pathway across the terrain of the ROUGH plateau, despite distractions I didn’t ever stray. The sun shines bright in seamless cobalt sky, colored canvas of contoured vale in sight, ripples of whispering breeze pass me by, while I trace butterfly trail of delight. IN TWILIGHT gleamed yard A SURGING STREAM flows, faith BUILDS A BRIDGE designed by destiny. When all the portals of time behind close, WALK THE LAST MILE on path of ecstasy. CROSS the bridge over THE stream-sliced ABYSS, God will take me TO the ABODE OF BLISS. journey of rough life finds a stream surging with strife… builds a bridge divine in twilight hour cross the abyss…walk the last mile to abode of bliss

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Date: 1/6/2024 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/2/2024 9:12:00 AM
Great write, Subimal. Kim and I are on the same page..."Cross the bridge..." are my favorite lines as well. Congratulations on your top win! Happy New Year, my friend! Charlie
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/3/2024 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Charles for the placement, and for the encouraging comment.
Date: 11/20/2023 7:58:00 AM
Love the lines: CROSS the bridge over THE stream-sliced ABYSS, God will take me TO the ABODE OF BLISS.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/3/2024 9:06:00 PM
Thank you, Kim for your appreciative comment.

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