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The John

Almost at the door when the light comes on, he jumps a bit scared in the night. The john, occupied by wife, took time off his life. Dethroned, not in bed - who would save Don Juan?!

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Date: 8/20/2023 9:29:00 PM
Most definitely dethroned...
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Date: 8/17/2023 10:09:00 AM
A creative/fun/cute Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh... Have a great day.............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2023 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 8/16/2023 6:46:00 PM
Very funny, Kim. I love the line 'took time off his life.' ... Really, all the lines are great. Keep 'em coming. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 8:16:00 PM
Thanks so much!

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