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The Jewel

The Jewel… There is a circular path which I walk there, Every day is the same, does not matter where. The mornings and the nights, they come and they go. I am drowning in pain; save me if you care. Who is at fault that I lost my precious jewel? I’m lost in my room, wondering like a fool. Where is it gone? Mirrors not showing his face. Whoever took my youth was so ever cruel. The nightingale tells me to break from my cage. Night after night reminded me of my age; They tell me to drink and forget there is death. If I die, who’s the one to write my last page? I am so so drunk I can’t drink more. The wine is not the one I need anymore. I need tender loving; no way I can wait. I want it right away; I want it for sure. Come my darling, I’m in pain, can you see? Without you, laughter and sunshine cannot be. You are my beloved, brighten my despair, Come and open the cage; I want to be free. I love you more than my love can ever say, I want to write your name all night and all day. I am old, but I am in love with my love, I’m hoping that this time you will stay. If I will live again, I’ll live like a fool. No more pain, and no more books, and no more school. I will laugh, and I will play, and I will dance, I will shine as a youth like a precious jewel. 2/2/2018 Haloo The poem is a combination of a few Rubai, called Rubaiyat. To learn more about this form check Types of Poem in Poetrysoup.

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Date: 7/30/2018 9:29:00 PM
your love is loving to be passionate. I love that passion but its too much to keep you in control. Nice piece my friend
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Date: 7/31/2018 10:08:00 AM
I'm in control of nothing, particles randomly collide. Thanks my friend.
Date: 5/9/2018 12:09:00 AM
A very heartfelt poem, Pashang. I feel your pain.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/21/2018 1:47:00 AM
Thank you Carole...
Date: 5/8/2018 6:42:00 PM
A deep and powerful write! A great joy to read it! Youth is your lost gem, set yourself free and divine love is gained.. Stay Gracious.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/8/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 5/7/2018 8:43:00 PM
This is indeed a jewel. You have mastered this challenging form which I have yet to try. What a beautiful, romantic piece you have penned! Well done, dear Pashang! Hugs. Pandita
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 5/8/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thank you Pandita... I love you more than my love can ever say... :)
Date: 4/27/2018 5:15:00 AM
Love the form, and love this wonderful poem, I believe a honour to read
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Date: 4/27/2018 4:17:00 PM
Thank you Harry...
Date: 4/26/2018 11:05:00 AM
Hi Pashang, an excellent Rubaiyat from your pen. The precious jewel that sings in the lonely night, love. A gentle journey through your mind. May your pen ever run gold. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/27/2018 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Mike... You are so kind...
Date: 4/23/2018 4:00:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your Rubaiyat Pashang, so well written. :))
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/24/2018 2:05:00 AM
Thank you Roy, this is the first time on my site hopefully is not the last... Welcome
Date: 4/21/2018 6:18:00 PM
To live again with the wisdom of ages in the body of youth. Ah yes, let's dance.
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Date: 4/21/2018 8:17:00 PM
Let's dance baby... Thanks
Date: 4/21/2018 5:15:00 PM
you soar with this exquisite write so fluent and melancholic... greeat rubayait, pashang!.. huggs
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Date: 4/21/2018 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Nette..
Date: 4/21/2018 2:01:00 PM
I can feel your longing, Pashang. Lost love can bring both pain and despair. Oh to be given one more chance! ~ Regards // paul
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/21/2018 8:15:00 PM
Indeed... thank you Paul
Date: 4/20/2018 5:39:00 PM
Often all we want is to shine like a precious jewel in front of those we love, oft. life breaks us and people we love fail us, I love the write dear Pashang, well done
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/20/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thanks my dear... welcome to PS
Date: 4/19/2018 12:37:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely poetry and painting. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/19/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Ravi...
Date: 4/18/2018 11:27:00 PM
There are so many dimensions to your wonderful poem Pashang. Life is never easy. It seems we have too much love and not enough life or too much life and not enough love. But, at least we know one thing is sure Love in the next life will be immortal. I love your painting....Maria hugs
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/19/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thank you my dear Maria, if there is a next life I will live it backward.
Date: 4/18/2018 6:13:00 PM
You are very good with this form of poetry, Pashang. Is it a form from your country? Beautiful job.
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:42:00 PM
Thank you Andrea... Almost all different types of poetry in PS is influenced by different cultures. Japan has several traditional forms of poetry : Haiku, Dodoitsu, Renga, Tanka, Senryu and Waka. India, Epic, acrostic Italy, sonnet. Persians: Masnavi, Rubai and Ghazal... This can go on and on..
Date: 4/18/2018 6:05:00 PM
Beautiful art Pashang, both words and brush strokes, thank you...
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Date: 4/18/2018 10:42:00 PM
You are too kind my friend...
Date: 4/18/2018 2:52:00 PM
- You are unique in your poems and paintings, Pashang - Lovely to read this evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise, I'm glad you liked my Rubai s..
Date: 4/18/2018 2:48:00 PM
I certainly feel the dimensions in your poem, Pashang. From pain and despair to longing and hope. The last stanza is awesome.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2018 4:17:00 PM
thanks Vijay, you are a great friend..
Date: 4/18/2018 2:35:00 PM
A picture within a picture within a picture - I have a feeling the middle picture is an image of yours I have seen before -I wish the picture was larger so I could see the inner picture more clearly. such elements of light and dark which is reflected in such a deep poem Pashang which has elements of your other recent mirror poem in it but the ending is so uplifting and full of hope and love:-) hugs jan xx
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/18/2018 4:16:00 PM
My dear Jan, Poetry soup cannot be without you....

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