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The Jelly Fish and Me

I had an experience when I was six, That scarred me for all time; Something that is in my mind, transfixed, I was victim of a horrible crime; While walking along the beach that day, I spotted a pretty shell; I made a beeline towards the spray, Where that pretty shell did dwell; Giggling and skipping towards my prize, I wasn’t watching where I put my feet; I took a jelly fish by surprise, And he couldn’t make his retreat; He was startled by the tiny child That trod on top of him; Scared, shocked, afraid and riled, He threw his tentacles around my limbs; I screamed like I had been stabbed, But I couldn’t break his grip; He was holding tight to what he’d grabbed, And that was when I tripped; I went down hard still dragging him, He put up one heck of a fight; Screaming and crying, my prospects look grim, Till Mom came and made it alright; This wasn’t the first time that I’d been told, To watch out where I put down my feet; But I guarantee that low and behold, That lesson was learned in complete; To this day I watch where I walk, Whether on the beach or not; Cause that one time was so much of a shock, It’s something I never forgot! ~I was in Corpus Christi-I dont' think that Jelly Fish ever forgot me either~ ~1st Place in the "Jelly Fish" Contest~

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Date: 7/19/2010 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:02:00 AM
Superb poem, and most deserved of it's first place win in Susan's contest >> James
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Date: 7/16/2010 9:48:00 AM
Congrats on your 1rst place win in the contest!I really liked your personal story and relation to the jellyfish at the beach. Love, Susan
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Date: 7/14/2010 5:48:00 AM
Awwwww, what an experience, but a teriffic poem!!! Jeralynn
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:53:00 PM
Congratulation on taking first place in Susan's contest, Tirzah. This was an experience to remember. I bet you never stepped on another one! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:49:00 PM
Ouch! Great poem. Congratulations on your big win ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:27:00 PM
WAY TO GO Tirzah.. first prize ..big congrats in the Jellyfish contest with this amazing piece.. enjoy .. u deserve a rousing HIP HIP HORRAY!! with luv..
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Date: 7/10/2010 12:28:00 AM
oh my, poor you! That must've been such an unforgettable trip! Thank goodness for your mom for making everything ok-- wish you the best in the contest :) - nikko :)
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Date: 7/8/2010 9:08:00 AM
OUCH! That's learning a lesson the hard way!Well done poem, Tirzah. Good luck in the contest: )
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