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The Island In the Baltic Sea

A seaman sails east, trailing the sight of dawn, as the seagulls dance in the wind. He stands with a smile, watching them flutter with their bright, beautiful blend. The sailor is brushed by a comforting breeze while looking at an island ahead. He stares it in silence, with its ominous clouds hovering with a glow of red. Drifting closer, he sees a woman just standing in the island's sand. She’s a georgeous lady wearing a long white dress, with a red rose in her hand. After reaching the shore, he leaps off the boat, then the woman starts walking away. He hurries to catch her, then touches her shoulder, and kindly asks her to stay. She snatches his wrist, and faces him quickly, with a knife in her other hand. She slashes his arm. He yanks away swiftly, then stumbles and falls to the sand. Rushing to his feet, looking over his shoulder, he sees her skeleton face. She rushes toward him, and the seaman runs away like a victim of a horrifying chase. After climbing the boat, he looks back to the sand, seeing no one there anymore. The only things present were the rose of red and beautiful white dress she wore. His blood disappears, the laceration heals, and the island fades away. Standing in silence, he stares where she was, wondering if he's gone astray. The seaman returns to the wheel of his ship, and steers quickly to the west. While catching his breath, he looks back shivering, fearing to continue his quest. Copyright 2007 INSIGHTS by R. A. Jones - Book Published by Publish America

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Date: 12/22/2009 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Roderick. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:25:00 PM
Quite a wild encounter! Very well written indeed. Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Caroline.
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:08:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/21/2009 5:44:00 AM
A beautiful and thought provoking poem, congratulations on it being featured
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Date: 7/30/2008 3:28:00 PM
Hi Roderick I truly enjoyed this amazing write. Ahhh, the sea can me very alluring and mystical. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Roderick. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:45:00 AM
Oh! To have those sailing days again. Congratulations Roderick, on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:30:00 AM
So enjoy reading this once again. Congratulations on being featured once more. Well deserved. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/27/2008 8:19:00 PM
The rhyme and flow in this poem were very well done - the storyline was interesting throughout - great job on this poem - congrats on being featured
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