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The Invitation

Longer fall shadows and a cool breeze that blows off summers' last fervor, invite September into the dwindling days of yet another year.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/6/2009 5:44:00 PM
Nice and simple poem. This really rings true! thank you for sharing this poem and complimenting on my poetry! I really appreciate it!
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Date: 8/30/2009 12:41:00 PM
Nice view for the upcoming season. The title complements the poem. See your Soup Mail. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 8/30/2009 6:38:00 AM
Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Sue. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2009 6:01:00 AM
Hi Sue, Wonderful Haiku's. Right now - I am seeing all the suttle changes taking place - turning summer into autumn as I look out my window. These changes always evoke such powerful emotions in me. Thank you for your warm welcome on my return. yf4l Lainie
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Date: 8/29/2009 11:04:00 PM
Sue this is a great haiku hon - I just loved it - YF4L - God Bless you, mj
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Date: 8/29/2009 8:07:00 PM
oh, September! my favorite month! love it! Sue! jim
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Date: 8/29/2009 7:18:00 PM
May I come too ? :) Beautiful Haiku, Sue. For me only the memories of a real Fall give me shivers of nostalgia here in California...Love, Iolanda
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