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The Injured Soldier

He fell, fell to the ground At the gunshot that created such a sound Nobody took notice of the injured soldier He was left there lying as the war grew thicker. He screamed from the pain growing in his shoulder Nobody realized the pain he would suffer Trampling feet and screams grew monotonous The injured soldier tried to ignore the pain that was so venomous. He made a decision for himself If he was to survive he'd have to help himself Nobody was going to come to his aid Not when each one was looking out for their own head. He winced in pain as he got to his feet He wouldn't give up now, not when he still had an army to beat His shoulder cried out to him in vain He had already chose to ignore the pain. He took his rifle up He adjusted his helmet and refused to give up He kept fighting till the war was over Each soldier fighting for their country, their home and their lover. When the war was done and the battle was won Every single soldier put down their gun the injured soldier's shoulder still bleeding now blinded him with pain and made him lose all feeling. This time they gave him attention This time he was treated to friendly affection He wondered what would have happened if had given up that night Would they have still won after all that fight? But he was glad he hadn't for he would have been seen As a pitiful injured soldier who wasn't keen. It's the choices we make And the chances we take That set us apart Only when, of course, the decision is made from the heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/23/2018 8:43:00 AM
sharp message thanx for sharing Sahitya
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Date: 3/6/2017 11:57:00 AM
Hi, My son would like to perform this poem in his school in a speech competition. Would you be ok with this? Also, could you provide any background to this beautiful poem? What made you write this? Any other background about yourself would be appreciated.
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Sahitya Poonacha
Date: 3/6/2017 12:17:00 PM
Hi Mr. Joshi, I would be honoured to have your son perform my poem. I wish him all the best for the competition. I wrote this poem in 2011 and I was just a fifteen-year old girl struggling to cope with my teenage years. That's where I drew the idea of the 'injured soldier' the soldier represents me and 'injured' represents my self-esteem. I was not able to find my confidence and there was a lot of turmoil otherwise in society that I read in the news everyday. This poem was written just to give everybody, including myself a little hope. I am truly delighted that you find my poem to be beautiful. Thank you so much.
Date: 2/8/2016 9:02:00 AM
Hi! My name is Claire Manning and I am a Fulbright English Teaching Assistant currently working in Sliven, Bulgaria. One of my students is competing in the Bulgarian English Speech Tournament and would like to perform this poem. Does it have an ISBN or has it been published anywhere? If not, would it be possible to obtain a letter granting my students permission to perform them for this competition? We would greatly appreciate it! Best regards, Claire Manning
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Sahitya Poonacha
Date: 2/8/2016 9:18:00 AM
Hey Ms. Claire! I am Sahitya, I am so happy that your student wants to perform this poem during the competition. I would gladly give you a letter granting permission as the poem doesn't have an ISBN. Would an e-mail do as post would take forever to arrive as I live in India?
Date: 9/1/2011 9:55:00 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today Sahitya. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2011 9:51:00 AM
A very nice flowing poem here Sahitya, Very thoughtful. God Bless....Taz
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Date: 8/31/2011 11:58:00 PM
A very strong poem..never giving up... decisions.... what a take. Thank you for sharing your poem,..pd.
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