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The Influence of March

Breaking winds came across the docks March has invaded Below a sky of pale blue mildly faded Floating around in one spot as thou they had to yield Ships of beauty wrapped in white jackets They rest like packages waiting to be unwrapped Wore paint on cutting cold rails No duologue, no chatter Just a sublet hint of spring A handful of scarce seekers popping out to peak Anticipating the fondness the summer brings And soon enough there will be a multitude of bodies Scrambling up and down the streets Places to go, people to meet Soon there will be sails to cut loose Sun scorched backs and inviting aromas of the sea But for now stillness envelops the harbor A reminder to embrace patience As I peered out the window of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/25/2009 6:02:00 PM
Great write...you are very talented
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Date: 3/22/2009 2:48:00 PM
a springtime wonder here! and thanks Laura!
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Date: 3/22/2009 9:11:00 AM
Just wonderful - I like 'ships of beauty wrapped in white jackets'
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Date: 3/22/2009 3:25:00 AM
Laura - This is a beautiful poem that envelopes a beautiful season - I love this time of year - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/21/2009 7:30:00 AM
I love the line..."a reminder to embrace patience"....that about sums up the month of March! Lovely poem, Laura! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 3/21/2009 6:52:00 AM
I love the picture you paint without the bodies of summer. There is so much beauty here, within the influence of March. Incredible imagery. The warm weather will be here soon enough, hang in. Love, Shar
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