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The Inept Ritualist

Nude, she stood alone in a copse of trees Brine taste of sea air brushing her skin Distracted mind, thinking of him Should not be here, in this place Circle glows somber green A single misstep Misspoken word Tentacles Drag her Down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/27/2011 5:21:00 PM
Hi LIam, so glad to have aboard Poetry soup. Interesting poem and so glad you will be part of us. Welcome aboard. lee
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:48:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Liam. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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