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The Indian In the Sky

Looking at the peaceful setting, I look up and quickly realize. That an image is taking shape, Forming in a rather large size. It is the shape of a grass dancer, Grass dancing on the clouds. Dancing to the beat of the thunder, I hear his dance steps aloud. As the lightening strikes, The thunder rumbles, and sounds. His feet tap four times then he strides, Spinning and pacing around. Full of strength, his dance is endless, Yet disappears in the blink of an eye. I was treated to a dance of cloud stepping, By the Indian in the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/17/2009 1:27:00 AM
Awesome title, and a classy poem to run with it, James
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Date: 12/6/2008 8:02:00 AM
I liked this! I have some Cherokee in my ancestry and was really captured at the story you told in your poem. I could see it so clearly! Love the imagery you used. God bless and thank you :) for the very kind comments on my poetry, they are truly appreciated. Happy Holidays to you and yours! Amy
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Date: 11/14/2008 11:48:00 PM
like this poem, I searched the internet and only found 1 book @ Trafford Publishing.
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Book: Shattered Sighs