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The Indian Giver Love Bandit

He promised to love me forever Then again he was just being clever He took back his love So I gave him a shove Headfirst in cow dung-my endeavor! ** for Indian Giver contest sponsored by(Destroyer ((Poet

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Deb. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2010 6:47:00 AM

Deb, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 5:57:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. A real Limerick Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2010 11:53:00 PM

I liked this before and i like it now. A very good one. Congratulations, Deb!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 5:10:00 PM

Congrats Deb on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too...

John Freeman

Date: 12/26/2010 10:31:00 AM

Sounds like an appropriate thing to do Deb. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Deb

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 11:17:00 PM

DEB, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/18/2010 10:54:00 AM

First lines meters off STRESS, STRESS, unstress, STRESS..you want unstress STRESS or unstress, unstress, STRESS... these are alot harder then folks think! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2010 5:42:00 PM

haha, you did one like mine! Good luck in the contest, dear. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/10/2010 12:42:00 PM

Very very humourous and frolicsome with distinct wit, Deb

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/10/2010 11:35:00 AM

This is super funny, Deb!! Really enjoyed the laughs, especially your closing line. Best wishes for success in the contest! Have a wonderful holiday season. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/10/2010 9:17:00 AM

A wonderful Limerick full of humor and great message to those Casanova's out there..Deb.. good luck in the contest... enjoyed with luv.. happy weekend..I recall my entry is Indian Giver Casanova.. coincidence or fact? ..haha..