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The Independent Girl

The independent girl walks alone and flips her own pages she can't help that she experiences sadness in so many different stages. She hates that with independence comes a lot of lonely nights as she tosses and turns in bed her pockets maybe swollen but she has nothing holding her tight. A soft caress this girl craves more than anything else she'd give up all the wealth to not be by herself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/9/2009 8:22:00 AM
Nicely written poem Shahana, James.
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Date: 5/7/2009 7:52:00 PM
Very intuitive write, Shahana. Women have struggled for centuries to gain equality and independence. (My late husband used to groan and say, "You're so darned independent!") But with the independence we achieved there can also be a loneliness we did not seek. Funny how life throws twists like this at us. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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