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The Incredible Ruck

His eyes get bloodshot! Fight engorges his body! He roars and defends! Enter his red zone To hurt or help... be dismayed! His attack strengthens! He pays back double! He avenges his soul's sake! He cools down in days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/10/2009 3:10:00 PM
Interesting and vivid haiku series. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/7/2009 7:14:00 PM
I love your clever set of Haiku's. Laura
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Date: 1/7/2009 2:08:00 PM
Nice haiku's I love writing them too. DN
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