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The In-Between

Riffling book pages, as faces pass by She finds answers in silence and understands All is well. Sad for leaves getting out of sight yet still happy for the humor she found within She smiles... This is for all those who've wondered about that silence, of the what-ifs...but also learned to read in between the lines...

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John Freeman

Date: 9/3/2011 11:12:00 AM

Right on Nikko...congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 9/3/2011 10:23:00 AM

Many congratulations, Nikko : ) So Jack the Ripper didn't gut you, LOL

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/3/2011 10:09:00 AM

congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!!!---Lori

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 3:19:00 AM

A Sixth Place Win Congratulations. CR

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/2/2011 12:55:00 AM

Nikko, this is certainly an original, well done. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Paul Beadnall

Date: 9/1/2011 6:50:00 PM

congrats Nikko on your win blessings from Paul

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/1/2011 3:57:00 PM

This is quite a gem Missy ;) congratulations on your win.. Love this *mwahugs*

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2011 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/1/2011 1:09:00 PM

Very nice. congratulations. Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/1/2011 11:53:00 AM

ahhh.....Nikko....I would have placed this much higher....pure poetry!

David Williams

Date: 9/1/2011 11:31:00 AM

hey Nikko congrats on your win..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 11:20:00 AM

Congrats Nikko on your terrific win with this profound poetry luv.. nice dedication too...luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2011 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, nikko

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/27/2011 5:55:00 PM

I found this most interesting Nikko. I quite loved it. I have a place called the inbetween. Written well and thought provoking. Love the ending where it was made positive despite the sad...a reflection of you for sure. hugs, shar xoxo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 7:34:00 PM

thankkxx Nikko for all your great comments to my poetry my sweet friend.. also a yahoo too..luv... send me some warmth please...haha

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/23/2011 3:45:00 PM

Hi! Nikko, AGAIN~ Can you believe i have been on line for 2 hours.. that is the longest i have been on line... by the way hope you did not mind my silly comment earlier.. nice little poem.. enjoyed the smile she found in between.. glad i stopped by to close up my day.. have a nice one,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2011 12:42:00 PM

Lovely poetry from a lovely poetess.. those ruffling pages in the book are like life's ruffling sequences Nikko my sweet friend.. enjoyed this happy Sunday with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/23/2011 11:50:00 AM

Hon, there are so many times I wish I hadn't finished a book because reading it was such a pleasure. Sometimes I'll read the same book many times. You did a great job expressing your love for words and the comfort they bring, Nikko. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 9:20:00 AM

You think much but write a little. I expect more from you, nikko.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/23/2011 8:53:00 AM

Thanks for sweet comments Nikko, I added another couplet to it, let me know if you like it...luv Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2011 8:49:00 AM

very interesting and sober write from you, NIkko. YOu are very reflective in this one. And I hope you got to your yogurt on time. I had sure been eyeing it. Luv, Super fly

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/23/2011 8:38:00 AM

Love the idea of you smiling.... very nice write... with love Michael