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The Immortal Light of Being

I stepped into the hallway with the gait of someone on automatic pilot it was quitting time and the same old routine led me to the exit door unbeknownst to me my cell phone was forgotten my departure hastened by office gossip and as the elevator swung open a memory touched me on the shoulder I turned to retrace my steps they came from out of nowhere with this acidic stare that scared me and looked contagious “Do you believe in God?” they demanded I eyeballed them and tried to keep moving “Did you hear me?” they said, do you believe in God? Oh, and by the way you do look familiar” I replied, “The existence of an all knowing all powerful being is not a concern of mine” they said, “I’m sorry to hear that, but I will pray for you; you see God needs us to have faith in him” I said, “God does not want you to have faith in him, God wants you to have faith in me” they looked at me bewildered and before they could speak again I left them with these final words, “It’s a sure bet religion is what you get when mortals speak on behalf of immortals” they said, “I believe in God and I’m going to pray for you” and with that, they disappeared into the walls

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Date: 5/23/2021 7:22:00 PM
Thanks for entering your original poem, Ricky. Interesting story. This was a difficult contest to judge. Keep up the creativity.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 5/23/2021 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Juliet. This poem was both different and challenging for me to write. Thanks again.............peace!
Date: 9/27/2017 6:24:00 PM
Sometimes those are the best poems to read the ones the become their own thing. It was definitely an enjoyable read.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/27/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you my friend...............peace!
Date: 9/25/2017 8:52:00 AM
This is a very interesting poem, being a Christian I'm not quite sure how to respond to it except to say I enjoyed it.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/25/2017 8:48:00 PM
Edward I wasn't trying to make a statement one way or the other. This poem just became its own thing. Thanks for your input...............peace!
Date: 9/21/2017 3:29:00 PM
Wow! Now that's an unusual poem...full of great imagery. A little scary for me tho. Great poem!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/21/2017 6:39:00 PM
Thanks lady. I'm sorry I didn't mean to be scary. I think I was aiming for provocative and fell way short. Thanks again.............peace!
Date: 9/20/2017 8:46:00 PM
Excellent write!!!!!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/21/2017 6:36:00 PM
This poem is what happens when you leave a frustrated writer alone with a pen, paper, and a bottle of Pinot Noir. The essentials. Thanks for your support................peace!

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