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The Iceberg Analogy

The stammer is a complex thing all of life it's been with me an ugly monster in wait to pounce most folk don't understand or agree Sometimes you can speak ok but then it strikes your tongue to block anxiety fills you right to the top words won't come you're in full lock It's really like a great big iceberg above the water that's able to speak that's what folk see and hear makes them think you're not a freak! What lies down beneath the water there the real problem doesn't surface all the emotions and built up anxiety what folk don't see won't show it's face You're the one left to deal with it causing low self esteem and frustration at times you feel like giving up but remember you're one of a stammering nation (some thoughts on my lifelong experience of having a stammer)

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Date: 8/19/2019 5:49:00 PM
Hello Gordon, I have trouble expressing some words. Been like that all my life. I would listen to a person speak while they stammer until they are done. /that is what i would do. have a nice evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/20/2019 12:24:00 PM
Hello Gordon,Thank you for that.Yes i am patient with people with disability I always have been.I am happy to hear that their are people that recognise people with this speech problem.I still say if you need to talk i am here. have a nice day my friend.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/20/2019 10:07:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, I can sympathise with you and you are a very patient person and those that stammer like me would appreciate that I'm sure. THankfully thinks to seem to be better nowadays where shops recognise the need to help those with a disability. Blessings, Gordon
Date: 2/4/2016 12:02:00 PM
You're brave to share that information, and you certainly do not stammer over word choices in your writings, Gordon. Love your analogy. I think it applies to many people over other emotional problems.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/4/2016 4:52:00 PM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your thoughts, you're a real nice person, blessings, Gordon
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/4/2016 2:20:00 PM
It's always easier without being face to face, that doesn't make it any less brave to write. Who would've known if you'd not told. I respect that.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/4/2016 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Lin, glad you were impressed but assure you I'm not that brave normally, easier to do on paper than face on. Have blessed day, Gordon

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