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The Ice King

The ice festival was well underway magnificent sculptures everywhere in the centre in pride of place stood the Ice King looking regal sparkling and glistening in the sun yet if you lay your hand on him a fiery burning pain sears your skin he watches on unmoved by your pain his heart only made of ice is unfeeling he feels no emotions as he melts away 07/25/2013 written for Ice King contest

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Date: 8/22/2013 12:51:00 PM
Great uniquely creative winning work..Enjoyed reading it today..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/22/2013 10:24:00 PM
Sara you are so kind and inspiring ty Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/21/2013 4:53:00 PM
very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/22/2013 10:25:00 PM
Danesh hi how are you? Ty so much Shadow x smiles
Date: 8/19/2013 8:36:00 PM
I like! congrats. BG
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
hi Barbara and ty for liking it Shadow x smile
Date: 8/19/2013 6:11:00 PM
I really like this one Shadow, congratulations!
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
Ty so much Richard hope all's well Shadow x smile
Date: 8/19/2013 5:01:00 PM
Hello Shadow, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:46:00 PM
think of an ice cube sliding down your back lol ty Shadow x smile
Date: 8/19/2013 2:20:00 PM
- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Shadow! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:45:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise yes it was and ty Shadow x smile
Date: 8/19/2013 2:05:00 PM
SHADOW, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/20/2013 2:44:00 PM
hi and ty Skat both for place and contest Shadow x smile
Date: 7/26/2013 5:19:00 PM
Very interesting one. Very well written. :) Always, Laura
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Date: 7/27/2013 4:37:00 PM
hi Laura Ty for visiting my work glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/26/2013 7:46:00 AM
You melted this "Ice King's" heart! LOL Huggs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 7/26/2013 11:40:00 AM
hi Jack you an Ice King? never lol glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/25/2013 1:17:00 PM
Unfeeling with no emotions. He is a cold one all right. Well done..... Betty
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
hi Betty Ty for stopping in glad you like Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/25/2013 1:06:00 PM
- It is fascinating and amazing to watch ice sculptures - Bravo, a very good poem for the contest Shadow - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/25/2013 4:18:00 PM
hi Anne Lise and so nice of you to read very inspiring ty Shadow x smiles

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