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The Hurt

I swallow in the sorrow
Gulping whole this soiled, bleaching pain
Carry a strained smile
Choked in my mid breath

It's almost never ending
It can almost be heard
The hurt is almost lost
Too lost for words

I bury this smile
Choked in my mid breath
As the hurt transcends beyond
Almost draining

Too draining for words

Copyright © Banjo Casto

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  1. Date: 5/8/2012 5:00:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Banjo. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 7:19:00 PM
    This was well done, and I admire a person who can be honest about their life. I will give you one piece of advice you can completely ignore though... Surround yourself with people who help you see the good in this world, and not the people who sit with you and help you hurt more. Find people to understand your pain, yet help you see the wonderful person inside yourself. Remember those people will not agree always :) xoxox, Red Chin up the sun will come up tomorrow! hugs