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The Hunt

Our love was reaching at new heights but unexpectedly she disappeared; leaving my heart solitary. I rambled for her with wet eyes. Melancholy seized my soul. Thousand times I dried my tongue calling her name in the wilderness. But it turned out to be a waste of time. Then one night, I saw her in the woods and a chill ran down my spine; She was half human and half zombie; Grabbing an human arm with her teeth. I knew she would invade the hamlet as she was not in her own control. Slyly I took out my gun and ceased my beloved wife's heart forever. Eventually, I understood why she left me; because she loved me and didn't want to harm me. I hugged her strongly and sobbed for hours, "I'm sorry, forgive me." __________________________________________ Date - 7th November 2016 Contest - The Hunt Sponsored by: Casarah Nance

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Date: 1/2/2017 11:26:00 AM
Well done Augustus, congratulations...
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Date: 1/2/2017 11:45:00 AM
Thanks. --- Augustus
Date: 12/11/2016 7:10:00 AM
Good job with this imaginative poem, Augustus. Janice
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Date: 12/11/2016 7:25:00 AM
Thank you. Augustus
Date: 11/18/2016 4:21:00 AM
Congrats well-done x
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Date: 11/20/2016 2:05:00 AM
Thanks.. A.B.
Date: 11/17/2016 11:50:00 PM
fantasy-filled story worthy of a win, augustus.. sweet congrats!..huggs
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Date: 11/20/2016 2:05:00 AM
Thanks you.. A.B
Date: 11/17/2016 4:56:00 PM
This was a great take on theme, well done
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Date: 11/20/2016 1:13:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 11/16/2016 3:30:00 AM
wow! excellent write on this theme! true love is gushing out here ....some leave us though very painful for them for our good! Sacrifice! a 7! Unique idea here, i enjoyed it Dear Augustus:)// love, Anu:)
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Date: 11/17/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Anu.
Date: 11/10/2016 8:12:00 PM
wow, that was a good one, Augustus. I am a huge fan of WAlking Dead and this really put me in mind of what those poor people would be feeling to have to kill a loved one. HOpe Casarah likes this one you penned! (I am also hoping she likes MINE)
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Date: 11/11/2016 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, yes she will also like yours.
Date: 11/9/2016 7:59:00 AM
- A lively imagination, a great suggestion for this contest Augustus - Good luck ! - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 11/9/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thanks a lot. Hugs .. A.B
Date: 11/8/2016 9:11:00 AM
Hi Augustus, What a unique on the contest theme. I enjoyed the hunt although it was very sad. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -) Alexis
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Date: 11/9/2016 8:06:00 AM
Thank you so much.

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