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The Hunt

Slithering through the moonlit field A tiger king’s paws grow heavy, but silent; Eyes burning green in the darkened shadows While its tail curls quietly back and forth As if to guard an environ of wildlife, The breeze caressing a feline’s strong fur On a night gentle as its movement, lithe . Ears alert through the stillness of the grass, The beast picks up an unfamiliar sound, A quiver among thistles, a crawl along new leaves Smelling danger alive in the humid mist… Then, one click. A second thud , how quick! Until hunters draw nearer signalling a fire Of rifles in breaking blasts and roars… It’s body arched till limbs wobble Yet steadily, the king rises, leaping into the air; That with a final pounce and agile crush, Hunters become the game… mangled , dragged In a territory where man is the outsider, Forgetting the power of nature’s rites. 11/5/2016 For Casarah Nance: The Hunt Contest

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Date: 11/19/2016 5:12:00 AM
Great write and win...Congrats
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Date: 11/18/2016 12:26:00 PM
Amazing work with some great wording and powerful thought. Nice choice for the contest. Congratulation.
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Date: 11/18/2016 4:04:00 AM
Congrats well-done great poem x
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Date: 11/18/2016 12:01:00 AM
Nette, a beautiful and well-written poem. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:49:00 PM
Awesomely descriptive! Congrats on a win, this was great to read!
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Date: 11/5/2016 11:42:00 AM
Beautiful poem Nette!How are you?
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Date: 11/5/2016 6:33:00 AM
Absorbing read while stopping at the subtle wonders like at 'the breeze caressing a feline’s strong fur/ on a night gentle as its movement, lithe ' ... great work ...
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:27:00 PM
I love to see the table turned, very well done, and as usual beautiful poem!
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:43:00 PM
oh good, another one where nature turns on a crazy hunter. I love that, Nette. JOseph may did a good one with that kind of theme too. this should do very well in the contest.
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:20:00 PM
Great story, nette. I'm not really a fan of hunting for sport. If someone is going to eat what they kill that's a different thing to me. It's just the way I was raised. I don't think people eat tiger meat, so in this case the hunter got what he deserved. Good luck!
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Date: 11/4/2016 5:57:00 PM
Excellent Nette. Very gripping tale with great imagery. Have to admit nature lover that I am I was rooting for the tiger. I hate people who hunt for fun. Great job and good luck in the contest. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
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Date: 11/4/2016 4:33:00 PM
Though man is born with a survival instinct unfortunately too often hunting is for the thrill without remorse. Top-of-the-line poetry!
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Date: 11/4/2016 4:18:00 PM
The twists and turns of this extraordinary poem are arresting. Man can always be the beast. Rated 7 +
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:40:00 PM
Turnabout is fair play, difference is the tiger won't stuff and mount them just for sport. Vivid imagery Nette, I could sense the fear in the aftermath. Good luck, this is a definite contender! 7+
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:20:00 PM
- I could never kill an animal, but I eat meat - A wonderful poem, Nette - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/4/2016 1:50:00 PM
This was fantastic Nette. I felt like I was there, up in a tree watching all of this unfold. I got a sick feeling in my stomach when the guns fired but cheered when the jungle beast showed them who was king. Really well done my friend.
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Date: 11/4/2016 1:44:00 PM
Beautifully written with provoking imagery. You have a great talent. Keep writing.
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