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The Hunt

The tables turned, and the lion now became the prey A man with a long gun was out to slay This regal feline, the king of beasts His bullet ready to be released The hunter followed the lion's roar As deeper into the bush he went And when the lion roar was heard no more The man's senses sharpened in the uneasy silence He looked around, but still no sound He began moving with the stealth of a cat But his big boot snapped a twig on the ground And startled birds flew from their lofty habitat He watched them as they flew away Blaming himself for not being adept He was unaware that he was now the prey As behind him the lion leapt!

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Date: 11/18/2016 3:56:00 AM
Congrats well-done x
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Joseph May
Date: 11/19/2016 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Wendy
Date: 11/18/2016 12:38:00 AM
Nice double twist. Congrats! :-)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/19/2016 5:07:00 AM
Thank you Mark
Date: 11/18/2016 12:05:00 AM
Joseph, congratulations on the fine placement of your winning poem. An excellent poem to read. ~ Sonia
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Joseph May
Date: 11/19/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Sonia
Date: 11/17/2016 11:24:00 PM
cheers for garnering a huge win, joseph..huggs
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Joseph May
Date: 11/19/2016 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Nette
Date: 11/17/2016 7:09:00 PM
Congrats in the contest, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/19/2016 5:05:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 11/17/2016 4:44:00 PM
I loved the twist! Thank you for your entry and congrats on 2nd place ;)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/19/2016 5:05:00 AM
Thank you for my placement Casarah
Date: 11/9/2016 3:00:00 AM
Wow, I like the twist in your hunting story, Joseph:) thoroughly enjoyed:) I wrote somewhat on similar lines:)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/19/2016 5:04:00 AM
Thank you Jo
Date: 11/2/2016 2:56:00 AM
Excellent. Thanks for bringing attention to the plight of animals. Well said. Thanks for sharing it. .
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Joseph May
Date: 11/2/2016 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Ravi
Date: 11/1/2016 3:14:00 AM
I could see this happening... A scary image. Love it :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/2/2016 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Darren
Date: 10/31/2016 8:43:00 PM
Loved this one!!!! Great poem!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2016 8:54:00 PM
Thank you Arthur
Date: 10/31/2016 5:20:00 PM
Wow Joseph, this was moving and I was running, very scary x great poem x
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2016 8:53:00 PM
Thank you Wendy
Date: 10/30/2016 5:49:00 PM
oh wow, GREAT poem of the hunted turning on the hunter. ME LIKES!!
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Joseph May
Date: 10/31/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 10/29/2016 3:48:00 PM
Joseph, I can tell by the way you describe the beautiful lion that you are rooting for the lion. Some of my friends have hunted rabbits but only to feed the family. They wouldn't dream of killing animals for sport. I am happy that there are now laws protecting animals, especially endangered species. I hope the lion gets him lol. A great write to bring attention to the plight of animals. : ) 7
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Joseph May
Date: 10/29/2016 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Connie, I agree

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