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The House In Faded Yellow

The house in faded yellow Oh it looks so mellow A pool besides though shallow Bathing is one lonely sparrow Splendid wild garden all over Arroyo, sage, crimson clover Please Mr Bus man pull over Before this scene is over Just as I run outta luck Out darts a daring buck Right in front of a truck Oh, that had to suck!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/11/2016 2:57:00 PM
AN, it started so lovely and then oh dear, wonderful write, and welcome to poetrysoup, hope you enjoy the journey !
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Abongile Ncwana
Date: 4/12/2016 3:00:00 AM
Thanks BW!
Date: 4/10/2016 9:09:00 PM
oh my, it was going so peacefully and then that last stanza. What a surprise ending. I enjoyed this.
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Abongile Ncwana
Date: 4/12/2016 3:01:00 AM
Thank you Andrea:)

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