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The Hourglass

An hourglass of memories lies beneath our souls Countless moments of joy shared by two hearts bonded into one My heart raced against yours, how you would laugh and tell me yours was faster, it was, as you were the first to reach the finish line Well knowing you would be making the mistake of your life, could I dare tell you so? So for now, you will have to share this hourglass with me, when you visit, please remember not to lock the door.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/9/2008 11:21:00 PM
Bonnie could you expalin to me. What was the mistake of his life and why din't you want the door locked? The hourglass concept is wonderful. The heart part racing was joyful and funny. Man always want's to be first. Not me Ill settle for humbleness. lol. Thank you for writing mre poetry. I know you didn't do it for me but the timing was right. God bless you and may you have full closer. Michael Torres
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