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The Hour of Rebirth

The wise man fixed me with a bright blue eye And looked at me so deep within. It was as bright as stars and blue as sky And so my story shall begin… When gazing so distractedly from through The haze, I looked and I did see The prophet standing there. Before I knew, These words, so wise, he said to me: "You live your life so deaf and blind; It only brings you misery. Listen to me and free your mind And then your life shall, too, be free." I was knocked down and struck upon the ground But now is time to stand up fast. I tell my saviour-god that I have found An answer to my prayers at last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/22/2012 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week George. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:57:00 AM
Emotion and strong poem you written here George, good one! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:21:00 AM
George, This is a powerful write. i enjoyed reading it and thanks for sharing. Congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week..........S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/8/2012 12:45:00 AM
Beautiful!
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