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The Hour Glass

The sand in my hourglass holds that I'm old And that youth and my mind are of one date Lines etched in my face begin to unfold Still waiting the day I anticipate Youth has vanished, with its promise unfilled Memories dissolve and some I can't trust The years have passed while the days slowly build I've kept the pictures, watched them turn to dust Only cleaned them when my eyes turned teary As I sit and watch the sands passing through Flowing faster, with my legs now weary And I battle time trying to make do The hourglass, a lifelong adversary The sands now falling are solitary

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Date: 5/2/2014 12:41:00 AM
the couplet is a sad and beautiful summary of your thoughts. Which was your Miltonic sonnet? Did I see it?
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/2/2014 5:10:00 PM
hi Andrea it has miltonic sonnet in the title, and yes the older I get the more that couplet gets closer
Date: 4/27/2014 2:52:00 PM
the wonder of age is not allowing to let it stop you from dancing!.. beautiful, frederick!.. huggs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/2/2014 5:11:00 PM
I used to dance Nette but my knees won't take it any more

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