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The Hounds Are Barking Still

My slumber knows no measure... There be no sleep for me. The hounds are barking through the night For immortality. I toss them a leg of hubris And a banal cliche for slight effect. But their hunger goes unsated... I lay waste my self-respect. A few platitudes and twaddle Are quickly gobbled by the beasts. I make an honest effort at contrition To give aid to my relief. But my words of self-castration Seem to energize the hounds. I further try to appease and quantify... But I'm losing precious ground. I prostrate a harried confession. My delusive sins are now a flood. The wolf stands menacingly astride my door... The beast has tasted blood. Again... I apologize now threefold times Using paper, pad and quill. But it matters not to feed the beasts... The hounds are barking still. The End *Follow my cartoon at Webtoon Bob's Your Uncle.

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Date: 9/26/2021 9:38:00 AM
I am blinded by your brightness, A star in my sky you are.. Yours, Pamgie
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Date: 8/29/2021 2:09:00 AM
Fantastic write David, best I've read in a long while.. hopefully the beasts will soon start devouring each other. Best wishes, Anthony
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Date: 7/23/2021 7:50:00 PM
Excellent, brilliantly insightful! Loved this!
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Date: 7/23/2021 12:07:00 PM
That is a brilliant poem! Should have won POTD!! Congrats on the top win!!! Fully deserved!
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Date: 7/22/2021 1:54:00 PM
David, Excellent write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, David!
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Date: 7/22/2021 12:05:00 AM
Great metaphor used, David, congratulations on top spot win:)
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Date: 7/21/2021 11:43:00 PM
Congrats on your top win
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Date: 7/21/2021 11:15:00 PM
Hi David. Congrats on your well deserve top placement. I love this piece. It speaks straight to the heart. Blessing.
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Date: 7/21/2021 10:48:00 PM
The hounds are barking still - is a great symbol of all the poignant realities. Historically as well as realistically, the poem has a great place. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/21/2021 9:43:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this grim reality... in your excellent poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 7/21/2021 4:03:00 PM
Wonderful writing. Congrats on your top win!!! God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/7/2021 2:14:00 PM
Wonderful verses David! I don’t take freedom lightly. Nor brain waning the USA. For me, it’s dire and sinful and far from a joke. To apologigize for my hertage! May they all go up in smoke. Boo on the Teachers union who backed this. This is neither Stalingrad nor Wuhan Wake up poets! Best wishes David. Why not use real names! The USA is asleep as the train plunges over a cliff. A tragedy. Surely other countries will cheer our freedoms loss. Why does not one poet say it! Why?9 Pangi
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Date: 6/29/2021 5:23:00 PM
Hello David … no matter what we do, the hounds are waiting impatiently to keep grinding us into the ground. A great poem David - Lindsay
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Date: 6/24/2021 6:43:00 AM
What a delicious write. So entertaining and well expressed. In years to come this should become a classic. Bravo!
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Date: 6/23/2021 6:25:00 PM
McEdgar Allan McHattie, that is one mighty fine piece. ~ Evermore, gw
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Date: 6/22/2021 10:20:00 PM
Supurb.
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David Mchattie
Date: 6/23/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 6/22/2021 7:27:00 PM
Superb writing, David. I enjoyed your poem from beginning to end. Sometimes it does seem no matter what you do "the hounds are barking still." Metaphor?
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David Mchattie
Date: 6/23/2021 5:33:00 PM
I think it's like the red scare in the 50's. They will over reach and even the media will have to swat them down. Until then. Hang on to your hat... it's going to be a bumpy ride. Stay well my friend.
Date: 6/22/2021 6:32:00 PM
NOBODY EXPECTS ANOTHER INQUISITION.....you can't appease the hounds
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/26/2021 9:40:00 AM
To John..we are in an imquistion Where have you been. Pangie
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David Mchattie
Date: 6/23/2021 5:30:00 PM
I don't know why people even try. Nothing good comes of it. Have a great day.

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