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The hottest sauce in the universe

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The hottest sauce in the universe

The burning
The pain
I will not submit!

It will not stop
It only gets worse
I will not let it take over!

Here I go
Running in circles
I will not lose control!

I failed...

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  1. Date: 1/5/2010 8:44:00 AM
    sometimes the simplest poems we write are our best sentimental gems we find one day and laugh with our own selves, I've written poetry like this before and then found it latyer in life shook my head thinking to myself i cant believe i wrote that, this is like poetry soup year book material

  1. Date: 11/5/2009 9:12:00 AM
    Thank you for sharing your excellent writing today Echo. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2009 2:13:00 PM
    funny, welcome to the hot soup! keep sharing with us!!

  1. Date: 11/4/2009 6:51:00 AM
    Wondere what kind of sauce that was? Keep writing. Sara