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The Horrors of War

(NB The character in this poem does not belong to any country but is generic.) _______________________________________________________________ The sirens howl. I can smell the fear I sow in the city. My super gun can tear Through buildings Where innocent people Lie huddled in despair. I do not gloat. My heart is ice. I have a job to do. I feel all powerful like a god. I lie flat on the roof High on a building. The sun is high, Scorching unrelenting, blinding like a furnace grilling sweat out of me. Yet I lie still And watch the streets For the hated enemy. He'll come. He never learns. He too thinks he's like a god. One of us may be dead tonight. Or both! Who knows who? Far away I see the hill tops, where eagles dare to fly. Below the happy pastures, the luscious grasses tall and fine. Sheep graze, and women watch. I feel the desires of old. I wake to the present. I know my job. Who can beat me? They will not see me, Nor flee from me, They'll die at my hand. For I fight legitimacy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/3/2024 4:46:00 PM
Icy cold terror, such a chilling write Victor. My goodness, you captured what must be the heartlessness of one so ruthless. The scariest thing you have ever written in my memory, because your usual poems are of love and beauty. This one is terrifying, truly! You are a very gifted writer.
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Date: 11/6/2023 1:52:00 PM
Cool poem, Victor. i like the contast made with the grazing animals and woman watcching the pasture.
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Date: 11/5/2023 6:57:00 PM
WoW Victor. You capture the true sniper here. I could see him lying in wait for someone he doesn't even know. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/5/2023 10:51:00 AM
Powerful poetry, my friend!
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Date: 11/5/2023 3:44:00 AM
Victor, a powerful poem, well penned, hugs.
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Date: 11/4/2023 5:13:00 PM
A gripping and realistic portrayal of hellish war and its sad, bitter consequences. Superbly written. Blessings.
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Date: 11/4/2023 4:33:00 PM
This is very poignant...I guess you are personifying in this poem? Either way, you dare to be honest. I wish peace for you.
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 11/5/2023 5:17:00 AM
No personification of me. I am totally against war.
Date: 11/4/2023 3:36:00 PM
a heart wrenching poem, for me too, Victor, surprising and so realistic, a great master piece have a sweet and quiet sunday
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Date: 11/4/2023 9:14:00 AM
When one carries a gun, to use the tool effectively, you become that cold, unfeeling weapon. The gun has no caring mind, has no feeling soul. Only knowing what it is. It becomes you. Victors in war...but no winners. One can rebuild, paint over, but fragments and stains resurface. Bleed into waking and sleeping memory. Follow us into eternity. Great write, my friend.
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:34:00 AM
Wonderful story, Victor, enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.
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Date: 11/4/2023 7:28:00 AM
a heart wrenching poem Victor hugs jan x
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Date: 11/4/2023 6:52:00 AM
An unjustifiable power...murder has turned out to be a way of life, and that's tragic, Victor. The emotions you express in this lovely poem are bang on. And very painful. I don't know how the kids, adults, and military in such places sleep or survive.
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Date: 11/4/2023 6:00:00 AM
Wars are always destructive. Aptly evocative emotions you convey, Victor.
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Date: 11/4/2023 5:56:00 AM
- A power no human should have had...killing has become a part of his life...terribly sad, Victor - Great written - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 11/4/2023 4:52:00 AM
Sigh so sad! And heart wrenching! I cant even imagine how those children and individuals or soldiers in such places sleep or survive! Heart hurts! You’ve described very well and painted imagery so eloquently! Pleasure reading
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Date: 11/4/2023 4:47:00 AM
Your poem is powerful, depicting a soldier's perspective--the legitimacy and power he feels. I could smell the battlefield, feel his emotions, his strength. His are the 'the desires of old.' A truly well articulated creation! Enjoy your day, Sara
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Date: 11/4/2023 3:00:00 AM
Omg such a powerful poem. Well done!
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Date: 11/4/2023 12:59:00 AM
Engaging. I like that the character is generic.
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