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The Honest Merchant

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The Honest Merchant

My friend is shy, ‘cause we call her ‘Pumpkin’.
With great trepidation, she enters the gym
A look at her behind;
And the instructor declined.
“By the time ‘YOU’ are thin, fat will be ‘IN’”

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  1. Date: 5/27/2010 10:55:00 AM
    Really good one! I would have thought that it would have scored a little higher. Congrats on your win. Dan C

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 5:19:00 PM
    Congratulations Nitesh, on your 4th place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 12:38:00 PM
    Congrats on your big win in the Bulge contest with this great write...enjoy your win..with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 10:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. Joyce

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 9:35:00 AM
    The sarcasm of the gym instructor was very funny, Nitesh. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 5:46:00 AM
    Very humorous one. I enjoyed

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 5:32:00 AM
    With friends like you, who need enemies !! Mad me smile :)

  1. Date: 5/24/2010 5:13:00 AM