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The Homeless Gentleman

A homeless man I saw one autumn night. No blankets did he have as down fell snow. A coat he wore. I watched him pull it tight around his body. Colder it did grow. The other homeless on the street were few. I’m sure that to the shelters most had fled. But then appeared as if out of the blue a woman in whose sunken eyes lived dread. Perhaps there were no shelters to be found with extra beds that night. The woman laid her body down upon the cold hard ground. Beneath a store front’s awning she then stayed. The man went to the woman. Off his back he took his old worn coat. I could not hear his words! But chivalry he did not lack. She donned his coat before he’d disappear. An angel of the night or a mere man? Do angels shiver? As he passed me by, I thought to give him coins, but then he ran. To where? He vanished. I could only sigh. July 16, 2021 For the 'Touch My Heart' Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh

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Date: 8/15/2021 2:24:00 PM
Great heart-warming poem. How many times do you go out in the cold and shiver. Imagine shivering all night.
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Date: 8/9/2021 5:32:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... sad but beautiful. Certainly touches the heart and shows that chivalry is not totally dead - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 7/21/2021 2:16:00 PM
Andrea, this is a heart-warming write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/21/2021 3:48:00 AM
An heart touching write. Those who suffer understand others pain. Congratulation! Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments
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Date: 7/21/2021 3:42:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Date: 7/21/2021 12:00:00 AM
AN ANGEL OF MERCY DEAR ANDREA WAS RESPONSIBLE, DID THE GOOD DEED AND DISAPPEARED - A THOUGHT PROVOKING HEART WARMING WRITE. BLESSINGS AND HUGS JENNIFER.
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Date: 7/20/2021 11:49:00 PM
So thoughtful of him and touching, great poem, Andrea:) congratulations:)
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Date: 7/20/2021 9:14:00 AM
Andrea, a big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this lovely, moving piece! Janice
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:14:00 AM
Such a touching write....Congrats on your win dear Andrea :)
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Date: 7/20/2021 6:10:00 AM
Do angels shiver? Beautiful thought and question. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/20/2021 3:52:00 AM
Love this, Andrea. Congrats on a top win. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/18/2021 5:22:00 AM
A fave for me! What a brilliant write! May we all become so love enabled
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Date: 7/17/2021 4:12:00 PM
Andrea, A poem's coat made from finest material one can never buy, the warmth it gave, love. My favorite kind. -Richard
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Date: 7/16/2021 9:56:00 PM
An act of kindness will never be forgotten. Lovely compassionate poem Hugs.
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Date: 7/16/2021 8:57:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Your poem is absolutely beautiful. It definitely touched my heart. :-)
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Date: 7/16/2021 8:28:00 PM
I like your poem. I have also given my husband's coat from the back of our car to a gentleman on the same kind of night. I believe that angels do come in all shapes and sizes and that they do "shiver" & help us in ways we r not always aware of right away. I call these God Winks. I believe in angels:) Your poem was touching and I'm happy I found it.
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Date: 7/16/2021 7:24:00 PM
Very interesting verse, Andrea. Yes, I do believe that angels can walk the street and do miraculous kinds of things.
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Date: 7/16/2021 4:21:00 PM
Beautiful verse, good luck.
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Date: 7/16/2021 3:34:00 PM
The scene you describe is so real in some form. When we see it it tugs every heart. I hear your sigh, Andrea.
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Date: 7/16/2021 3:02:00 PM
Well written Andrea, we take so much for granted but everywhere there's folk without a roof over their heads. Tom
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