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The Hobbit and Lord of the Rings

12/22/14 Props to the original Baggins And his bravery towards the dragons While he could've stayed behind with the wagons Just a hobbit and quite the comic But he should've watched it And use all logic Before trying to put on the ring inside of his pocket Because another was unfortunate and lost it This made him scathing mad As he continued aging and Inside a cave in the hills, far away from any raging sands Originally had a name But overtime he had changed And was no longer the same They didn't know what else to call him Except for Gollum Because he had fallen And became solemn Meanwhile the orcs Marched with force After coming into contact with the source Of all evil from the North The bell continued to toll As the trolls Looked to take all souls With a heart darker than coal During the events The mist was dense And full of suspense But the ents that were immense Put in their sense And helped their allies get across the fence Here we go again Around the bend It didn't end In the eyes of children, ladies and men Who could be considered a trusted friend? By: Dalton Ogletree

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Date: 12/27/2016 4:47:00 AM
Great performance, this ode to Bilbo. I love it as lot.
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