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The Hill Farmer

...inspired by 'The Airy Tomb' by R.S. Thomas He tills within the buzzard's flight this cruel land he calls his home, ewe and wether, milk and bucket, broken spirit, ne'er to roam. He's stuck for good, the sacraments will guide him, right and wrong, gone his hopes, and his compassion, save for the lapwing's mournful song. Courted by the country lasses, love can't penetrate this soul, pain and grief his only parents, loneliness his only goal. Mother, father, gone to dust now, confidants who'd calm his fears, struggling with a heavy heart, internalizing all his tears. It's back to digging, discompacting stones and boulders from the earth, working 'til there's no more sunlight, Wales, inaugurator of his birth. Battling the elements he stretches every bone, every muscle, every sinew, 'til exhaustion brings him home. Ne'er a smile adorns his visage, there simply is no time for this, haggard, careworn, slave to nature, racked by weather's wantonness. Two weeks gone, and there they find him, cradled by the wind and rain, cadavered and condemned to fester, never to be harmed again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2012 11:33:00 AM
A farmer's life is certainly not an easy one but has its satisfactions. This poor fellow certainly did not reap whata he sowed. The last four lines wrap it up so sadly Keith.
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:56:00 PM
Wow! The powerful images convey this tragedy in a powerful way. Wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 5/27/2009 6:29:00 AM
Man O man, this is genius in exactitude, this is a prodigy of a poem ... I love it, bravo.
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Date: 5/19/2009 9:25:00 PM
Hello! Hello!, congratulations my friend for this beautiful write. I enjoyed reading it. My father was a farmer, and through farming he sustained the needs of his family. Thank you for sharing this to us. Ernilando
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:43:00 PM
Wow, powerful words. Very vivid imagery. The total bleakness in his grief is so chilling. Nicely worded.
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Date: 5/18/2009 4:13:00 PM
How sad the farmer worked so hard and had to die alone. We're told we reap what we sow, but this soul seems to have been lost with a "broken spirit." I'll have to check out the Thomas poem. Thanks for introducing it to us with your gifted pen, Keith! Love, Carolyn
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