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Several moons ago, I caught someone Dead to rights, without him noticing I was just yards away as he Clamped a nasty car note down With my windshield wiper; all because I unknowingly took the parking spot he wanted. Really mean things written in the note I still vividly remember... "_my_, you bastard" "next time, show some respect!" Before walking into his car to leave, I gently tapped him on the shoulder And startled him half to death! Eyeball to eyeball, we froze in realization; We aren't total strangers! Oh wow, we live just 3 blocks apart! I handed the note back saying... "I've read it. I don't need it anymore" Then I walked away, resisting the urge To unleash a torrent of contumely on him I felt angry and offended, But the thought of someday Returning the favor never crossed my mind I chose to believe he was simply Having a bad day. Besides, I could tell He was stressed and felt bad when I turned To look back at him seconds after walking away. It is tough taking the high road, forgiving vitriol Directly at you, but I felt free doing so, thanks to God. I pray that God continues to help him the same way, too. The High Road Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh Date written: 10/23/2021 *vulgar words deleted on purpose*

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Date: 8/22/2022 6:41:00 PM
It is tough taking the high road, forgiving vitriol...so true Edward! It CAN be heartbreaking as well. The road can be a dangerous place, we all have a place in it! I am visiting your trophy wins and enjoying!
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Date: 10/27/2021 10:28:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your top win! You handled this situation with dignity and grace. The high road is often narrow and steep but reaching the top has so many rewards! I remember on morning on the way to church a lady blew through a stop sign almost hitting me. Somehow God kept my mouth shut, my hand off the horn and in my pocket. When it was time to give peace I turned around and there she was! Shaking her hand, wishing her peace really had an impact! Blessings to you my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/28/2021 2:16:00 AM
"The high road is often narrow and steep but reaching the top has so many rewards!" I love this line! I couldn't agree more, Sam:-) Thanks for sharing such an amazing, really inspirational story! You're the salt of the earth!
Date: 10/26/2021 11:29:00 PM
A beautiful incident. The narration is very vivid and descriptive in fluently flowing words and verses. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/27/2021 7:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 10/26/2021 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations Edward, smiles for you :) Good Job :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/26/2021 8:11:00 PM
Thank you very much, Edward:-) Most appreciated, my friend.
Date: 10/26/2021 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on your awesome win. Love this. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/26/2021 4:08:00 PM
Thank you so much for the awesome feedback and my placement, Regina:-) What an honor!
Date: 10/26/2021 3:11:00 PM
A wonderful exposure to doing things the way God would expect us to. Congratulations on your first place win, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/26/2021 3:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jenna:-) Most obliged.
Date: 10/26/2021 3:10:00 PM
You were ten times the man he'll ever be Edward, you proved yourself the better person. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/26/2021 3:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Tom:-) I hope that man was really just having bad day that day, lol.
Date: 10/23/2021 11:55:00 AM
Hello Edward, you did the right thing. No it is not easy to walkaway from a situation like that. But you did it. i am proud. Good luck in the contest. blessings
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/24/2021 7:17:00 AM
Hello Edward, you are welcome my friend. weekend.my frind. Blessings. Darlene
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/23/2021 2:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene:-) I appreciate the visit and the wonderful, supportive comments, my friend.
Date: 10/23/2021 7:55:00 AM
Good luck on the contest. The line that makes me smile, “I pray that God continues to help him the same way, too.” :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/23/2021 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edward:-) Blessings to you...

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