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The Hidden Stone Mossy vines served as camouflage for the decaying headstone buried there below. A hidden stone that peeked from the earth floor soon held my eye with the desire to know... was this an old headstone above a tomb neglected in these weeds from long ago? If so, who lies here sleeping in death's womb; something inside told me I need to know. I pushed aside the camouflage of vines and shallow letters showed through years of wear. But when I saw a name that looked like mine, my heart was stunned, and all I did was stare. Green mossy vines had camouflaged this grave that guards the edge of grandpa's vacant farm. Today, I found his dad who died so brave... a soldier, guarding country, from war's harm. Green mossy vines held secret this dear place. What led me to the farm I know not why. Perhaps great grandpa called me here with grace to find his name engraved beneath the sky. And now I stand here at his tomb and sigh, where mossy vines embraced him all these years, brought here by fate to humbly say goodbye... my feelings camouflaged in flowing tears. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Secret Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal Judged: 12/29/2018 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Camouflage Me A Poem Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 07/10/2016

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Date: 12/30/2018 10:48:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/3/2019 4:37:00 PM
Thank you once again, dear Alexis! I am most appreciative! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/29/2018 1:54:00 PM
Such a brave man he was, a soldier and his story was suppose to be known. I absolutely love reading this wonderful poem of yours, you sure are a great storyteller, many congratulations on your 2nd position in my contest, this poem sure was a beauty, good luck and have a really nice day
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/3/2019 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, Faraz, for the great contest and my nice placement. I am so pleased that you liked my poem and appreciate your uplifting and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 8/12/2016 10:55:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem and I love the image too!
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Date: 8/11/2016 6:33:00 PM
A great last line Sandra...Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/11/2016 4:37:00 AM
Well written, Sandra:) Congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 8/10/2016 11:23:00 PM
Hi Sandra, You penned such a touching and heartfelt piece. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:41:00 PM
Sandra, such a touching story you told in such a wonderful flowing manner...well done lady, congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:01:00 PM
Once again, you have proven what a great story teller you are in your unique poetic way! Congratulations to you, Sandra!!!
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:58:00 AM
This reads and feels like a winner Sandra!Loved it totally!
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Date: 8/6/2016 8:12:00 PM
Hi Sandra, you had my attention from the first lines of this gem. I love the content and the flow of this piece. Your imagination sings in this one Sandra. This is a beautiful, well thought out piece. I hope this one will do well in the contest Sandra. It does read so well. A lot of thought went into this write Sandra. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 7:01:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Mike. I am pleased that you enjoyed my poem. It is fiction, but I know this could happen. I appreciate your supportive comments and good wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/5/2016 9:07:00 PM
great take on the theme Sandra I went in a similar direction.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/5/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thank you very much, John. Yes, I did read your poem and your take is similar. I appreciate your visit and support. Sandra
Date: 8/5/2016 1:19:00 PM
Very emotive write Mrs Sandra. Finding a loved one's lost grave can be very moving, especially one who has served their country.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/5/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Of course, this is fiction, but can and does happen. I appreciate you stopping by with your nice comment. Sandra

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