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The Helmsman

“Over there,” yelled the Helmsman “On the Starboard side.” Though when I looked from left to right Nothing caught my eye “Over there,” he yelled again “On the starboard side.” And again as I looked from left to right Nothing caught my eye But I knew when I saw her For she was not water nor was she beast That she had come upon us To rest us all in peace Her fingers rattled the rigging As all hands fought to stow the cloth The helmsman lashed himself to the wheel We faced the worst of her wrath Then she brought the main-mast down The crow’s nest crashed upon the deck Fear eclipsed all conscious thought For we floated upon a wreck Our lives so fully in the hands Of nature’s primeval fury We prayed to our mystical gods For their heavenly mercy Lo she ignored our desperate pleas As she drove us beneath the waves Relaxed and confident she left us To our watery graves Then the helmsman free from his shackles Pulled us with all his might Dragged us by our sodden collars Toward the watery moonlight The helmsman of defiant strength Pulled us with all his might Through our aquatic graves To freedom’s shining moonlight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/19/2021 12:50:00 PM
Just a revisit Scott, and feeling an amount of Hope the chance of repreive.'
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Date: 1/3/2018 4:15:00 PM
So vivid and tranfixing, i had a love of the sea before I sailed upon her. Then once offshore, some of the romance departed, as I had to make the damn thing go round the clock. Much of it was dull, but those times like you describe, well, you grow up in a hurry.
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Date: 10/27/2017 7:49:00 AM
Enjoyed this one, Scott. O mighty helmsman indeed! I, for one, most fervently hope your ink is now spilling freely once more! All my very best, Scott! :) john
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Date: 8/16/2017 10:05:00 AM
This is exceptional poetry my friend.. Riveting from start to finish and superbly created and presented. Without any doubt, a very solid ten and a fav for me.. Loved every word of it...
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Date: 3/11/2017 9:47:00 PM
Thrilling tale! A gift of a write.
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Date: 3/5/2017 5:40:00 PM
really love this one, mate
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Date: 3/2/2017 5:07:00 PM
This is really a great poem! love the story within and the struggle. great write/great read!
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Date: 3/1/2017 12:13:00 PM
The imagery of this piece is well suited to the emotions solicited from the author, one of dread with sinister reverberations. Emile.
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Date: 2/23/2017 8:23:00 AM
I fear the seas, but I love how you have woven your words and came up with a descriptive and visually strong piece! Great, Scott!
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Date: 2/20/2017 8:00:00 AM
I thought I would read this one again. A most impressive write.
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Date: 2/17/2017 9:44:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, Scott. Hope to see something new from you SOON!
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Date: 2/16/2017 8:56:00 AM
Exceptional writing, I really felt this one Scott. Bravo and a 7.
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Date: 2/10/2017 9:37:00 PM
:) I like this a lot!! Scott... reminds me how important "mares tails and mackerel scales" are!! ;) wonderful poem!! Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 2/8/2017 2:49:00 AM
- Scott, a truly wonderful poem - Well done !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/7/2017 11:42:00 PM
Your imagery with personalization is outstanding in this dramatic piece Scott. Very well written with a fantastic ending! I am afraid of the sea and, other than taking Ferry rides from shore to shore, I don't like being on the open sea far away from land. Flying is a different story. LOL ; ) 7
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Date: 2/4/2017 2:50:00 PM
Yes where would we be without Him? another good one mate.'
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Date: 2/1/2017 3:36:00 PM
wow, this is wonderful extended metaphor, Scott. VERY nicely done!! A great poem.
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