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The Heavens Trapped

I see you walking on the beach with the shyness of a kite, toes gripping the sand with eyes that float to the ends of the sea - tell me (why do you look to the stars, love, when we are more amazing?) There are dreams within dreams in merely the sheen of your crystal clear eyes Yet with each breathless sigh I can hear you hesitate (...lunar cycles, she coolly states, we are but a phase...) Tell me, dear, where else do the heavens find themselves trapped but in your gaze? Does not the Sun give us light each day? (the Sea itself takes time to lick our feet, as vast as she is, despite how we treat her -- she comes back again, nevertheless) Is the Grass, as green as it is, aware of its sheen? Do the Miraculous Butterflies long to metamorphosize yet again (or are we the only creatures who dream?) Do the Mountains boast of their grandiosity, their towering tallness? (why then, do we meek and mild, feel embarrassed over our smallness?) Take me back to the time when all of these things were gods and we were merely chattel, (just the remains of a celestial battle) the forgotten residue ----is that You? An afterthought of a careless god from cradle to grave? We were unchained long ago, yet still think we're slaves... -- sitting on the hoods of our cars, wishing upon shooting stars, thinking love is somewhere out there beyond the clouds or perhaps even the ether And yet it's neither It's right HERE As tangible as the question lying in our reflection-- (the truth committing suicide on our tongues) We'll conquer every mountain, every sea, travel beyond the farthest galaxy... ...before we ever contemplate the miracle of You and Me

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Date: 6/9/2020 11:16:00 AM
Wow! This is..what should I say... beautiful. Really beautifully written I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing Timothy!
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Date: 5/13/2020 11:52:00 AM
I imagine that many will come to you for wisdom Timothy.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/14/2020 9:58:00 AM
It's a nice thought ... who knows?
Date: 5/11/2020 12:14:00 PM
Thanks Tim: I appreciate your friendship too. If I replie below it would come back to me. Have a wonderful day.
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Date: 5/11/2020 9:45:00 AM
These are awesome thoughts you have strung together to form a superb and brilliant write - the butterflies, the mountains, the green grass, the stars in the heavens, the sea, all are there for us to see, Gods creations, even the miracle of You and Me. Kudos Timothy. Hugs Jennifer,
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/11/2020 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer!
Date: 5/10/2020 12:03:00 PM
I wonder how long it takes you to write these... Sometimes I think they flow naturally through your pen....
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/11/2020 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Silent ... for the most part they come freely, almost all at once. Other times I flesh it out for quite a bit until I get it where I want it.
Date: 5/9/2020 2:44:00 PM
I am so glad to see your Muse has come back in full force. If we can find the magic in the everyday we are one of the lucky ones. This poem is another gem to add to your crown. SuZ
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/11/2020 11:16:00 AM
You are very generous, Suzanne. Your friendship is a gem, too, to add!
Date: 5/9/2020 8:24:00 AM
You express yourself through the mind of one who is old and wise, Timothy, concealing your much younger age. Then your reasoning becomes contagious, and the reader starts nodding in agreement. This poem reminds me of that man who travelled far & wide to find true love, till one day he realized that he had it from the very beginning. ~ Regards // paul
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/11/2020 11:15:00 AM
Always so robust in your insights ... yes ... the man who had everything in his pocket, but went around the whole globe just to figure it out. Thanks Paul.
Date: 5/8/2020 10:22:00 PM
We are just a tiny speck in this amazing world. Do we realize that? Perhaps some do. Some may not fully understand. I do. I am wrapping your words softly around me. The beauty within is mesmerizing. Captivating. All were made by our Creator. Highest mountain, the deepest see. You and me. Your thoughts leave me in awe. :) Brandy
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 2:14:00 AM
I never tire of your comments and sincerity, Brandy. You seem to realize our place in this world, and your sentiments echo mine. Thanks for the lovely feedback.
Date: 5/7/2020 12:18:00 AM
you inspire another poem: we only feel meaningful as part of the Cosmos, never as individuals (The only magnet for independence - even in our own pads - abuse apart, I have to CMA/cya) is to indulge & explore senses & sex. Usual sensual pleasures - even in marriages - mostly took place in small, crowded rooms, shared with family. But let me not divert from the beauty of the dialog & messages galore in TH's poem, Thanks & shalom shalom
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 2:10:00 AM
You are very kind, Anil! Words that inspire other words is a domino effect ... it's great to see.
Date: 5/6/2020 11:58:00 PM
We as humans are allowed to evolve to what we are today, and there are many aspects to what and what not they have achieved,,Poetry is one, and your, remarkable renditions are superb..
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 2:09:00 AM
You leave such a robust and thoughtful comment, I really take it to heart .. thanks Harry!
Date: 5/6/2020 6:26:00 PM
I just dropped my pen. My mother tongue appears to have abandoned me too. So good.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 2:08:00 AM
Your speechlessness is noted ... thanks Maureen!
Date: 5/6/2020 6:14:00 PM
Indeed each of us is a miracle. It’s sad that we place such little value on each other. Another superb piece Timothy.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 2:07:00 AM
I thought you would appreciate this one ... I was partially inspired by an old church father Saint Augustine of Hippo. He had a lot of thought provoking quotes ... and some of what he had to say about the importance of humanity really spoke to me.
Date: 5/6/2020 5:38:00 PM
Your poem is a beautiful dialogue on love, life, and nature--wonderfully depicted Tim. Enjoyed the contemplative tone and flow--excellent write!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/9/2020 2:06:00 AM
Thanks Vijay!

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