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The Heavens Acquiesced

The Heavens Acquiesced Bubbles rose on moonbeams glow lost fairies trapped within held prisoner on currents flow by liquid walls so very thin drifting in the moon blue sky the captives of the light danced within the bubbles skin gave song to silent night rose until the light of day obscured by horizon’s crest shone upon fine fairie wings as the heavens acquiesced found joy within the glowing orbs hanging in the dark of space peace within the fairy songs soft filigree of moonlight lace so do the fairies rise to height orbed prisons without bars drifting in the moon blue sky fairies become the stars 6/17/2015 submitted to – FANTASY – Poetry Contest sponsor – Mystic Rose

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Date: 6/30/2015 6:23:00 PM
ooo... nice
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:21:00 AM
John, Congrats on the fantasy win...... SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 6/28/2015 6:28:00 AM
Thanks SKAT for your continuing support
Date: 6/27/2015 7:41:00 AM
Perfect! Congratulations on a fine win.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Richard for reading and commenting
Date: 6/18/2015 12:17:00 AM
Your imagery really matches what I think Mystic Rose was portraying in her fantasy pictures, and it works! Very well written, and good luck in the contest :)
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2015 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Laura for reading and commenting, always good to hear from you.

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