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This is a true story and it poured down in the valley for the rest of the day which was a Sunday

One day high up on the moors the sun was starting to rise I thought at first I could see lakes and in the distant sea. Then realised I was above the clouds. It was peaks of hills that poked their heads out over the haze. It was like a new land showing itself bathed by sunlight I looked around in amazement. Gradually things came into focus valleys appeared like magic each one with its own splendour Deer and ponies grazing below me' Birds singing in tree tops close by A stream fills the lake and fish leaping so full of joy and life for the new day I sat, watched, delighted by all the sights. The clouds rolled by, lifting up higher I was truly right above it all, on top of the world As I drove home I dropped down lower and lower to the bottom of the valley under the clouds. The rain clouds lashed at me no sunshine here it did not clear just more and more cloudy rain. Yet I knew that on the top of Exmoor It was a bright sunny day no rain up there

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Date: 12/28/2023 7:17:00 AM
Shadow, your poem is very lovely, with the beauty of a lovely melody. It is hugely remarkable to see your ability to not only discern such subtle distinctions but to weave them into a gorgeous tapestry of words that inspire vivid images while voicing the essence of life's natural marvels.
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Date: 12/30/2023 6:59:00 AM
hi there Sotto I have missed you of late. Your words are always inspiring helping me to strive harder to write better poems hugs Shadow
Date: 12/27/2023 11:55:00 AM
Oh its so inspiring when we notice such things and you have turned it into a wonderful poem, where you wise selection of words have created the most vivid imagery describing the natural tapestry of life... loved this one Shadow..
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Date: 12/27/2023 4:55:00 PM
ahh SO ty very much your words bring me hope that one day I might ( just might) write a poem worthy of your esteem hugs Shadow
Date: 12/27/2023 6:37:00 AM
Sounds spectacular. Living in British Columbia I can escape cloudy days with just a 45 minute drive. It makes the winter far more enjoyable. I enjoyed your poem Shadow.
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Date: 12/27/2023 4:47:00 PM
ty dear friend you are right that a few miles can change everything hugs Shadow
Date: 12/26/2023 4:05:00 PM
exquisite imagery, Shadow...I loved 'peaks of hills that poked their heads about over the haze. I used to live outside El Paso and the Franklin Mountains. The fact that the weather in the mountains was far different from the weather at the base of the mountains. You captured that scenery beautifully. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 12/27/2023 4:44:00 PM
ty Sara it was magical back then I experienced this around 1986. you could not imagine two more in tune places Hugs Shadow

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