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The Haunted House

Steps in - What din! Rat squeaks Floor creaks Let loose, Ghost boos Blood Pool - Bats drool! Strobe lights, Snake bites Suspense - Live Fence! Zombie - Crombie* Cat's eyes - On mice Closed space, Lined face Blue slime, Red grime Skulls stare - BEWARE Quiver, Shiver! Loud cry... Mouth dry Our horde Spots board: .... Your end, My friend ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Richard Martins

Date: 10/1/2016 11:57:00 AM

Awesome, awesome and awesome again!! I just came across your poem. Fantastic. I have added to my favs :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2015 2:22:00 PM

Sneha, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/12/2015 8:13:00 PM

Yeah this is really good congratulations on your win and adding this to my favs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 10:51:00 PM

hey, I see it again, and this time to congratulate you! NICE win

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/12/2015 1:07:00 AM

THANK YOU, Andrea!! :D :D

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/8/2015 12:32:00 PM

Wow, you really captured all the scary scenes in a haunted house in so few words with your awesome Footle, Sneha! Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/8/2015 11:13:00 PM

Thanks a LOT, dear Sandra!! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 11:49:00 AM

I read these yesterday - my comment has disappeared! many congrats these are brilliant:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/7/2015 9:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Jan! :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/7/2015 3:36:00 AM

just incredible!.. woohoo, sneha!.. huggs

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/7/2015 5:54:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Nette!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2015 4:43:00 PM

Outstanding!!

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/6/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thank you!! c:

Judy Konos

Date: 4/6/2015 10:28:00 AM

KQQL

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/8/2015 11:14:00 PM

Thank you SO much for my placement in your contest!! :-D

Kamran Rashid

Date: 4/6/2015 8:08:00 AM

u frightned me..and made me to say wow wot a nice write...lovd reading your stuff..pls find time to read some of mine...hope you will like a few #respect--peace--hug--@burningsoulz

Sneha Rv
Date: 4/6/2015 10:42:00 AM

Thanks a lot!! :D