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The Haunted House

T railing along a serpentine lane, curiosity allows H unt of one mysterious journey where glimpses trace E vening's silhouette reflecting a dream-like scenery. H eavy vines enshroud an old manor’s archway A s I peep quickly through its blood-stained corners -- U nderneath, ravens hover while evening befalls N ot knowing my dress gets caught on a thick nail, T hat hands quake while freeing its hem. Grotesque the room’s decor E ntwined are torn drapes, candelabra, and antiquated portraits... I run D efying moon’s bold sheen almost vague now, undone. H eart pulsates from loud whimper of voices in hiding-- O angels dear, I need to escape, what could be my options? U ntil a knob opens through zoom of intemperate breeze S hrieking, hollering down a cracked ladder, feet dash off to E nd this TERROR, a night’s venture, macabre. The Haunted House (Scare Me or Make Me Laugh) Contest Sponsor: Dear Heart 8/29/2018

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Date: 10/7/2018 8:07:00 PM
A feeling of mystery and terror accompanies your imaginative write Nette.
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Date: 9/16/2018 8:05:00 PM
I'm a little late, Nette, great acrostic, imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 9/5/2018 11:27:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest, you chose a difficult form to tell your chilly tale and did it really well !
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Date: 9/1/2018 7:16:00 PM
The words you chose add intrigue and uniqueness Nette. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 9/1/2018 3:42:00 PM
Many congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, it sure is a beauty and certainly a joy to read,
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Date: 9/1/2018 12:29:00 PM
Very creative, Nette. Love the way you did this. Great write! Congrats on your win...hugs // Charlie
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Date: 9/1/2018 12:05:00 PM
Good write ,Nette ..This shows dexterity ,using acrostic form...Congrats on your well deserved win in this contest...kudos to you great poet..
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Date: 8/30/2018 12:35:00 PM
I would not have thought of putting that in Acrostic but, you've done it rather well; well penned and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/28/2018 11:08:00 PM
I love watching scary movies, and this could be the beginning of one. You have created a creepy acrostic. ~ Brandy
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Date: 8/28/2018 5:06:00 PM
You got the haints scared. Reads like a good contender in the contest. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 8/28/2018 3:17:00 PM
A burst of creativity to write it the way you did...you undressed 3 words and revealed it...:even the article was stripped naked in this haunted poem...Nice one nette
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Date: 8/28/2018 3:15:00 PM
Pretty spooky! Great acrostic Nette. Best wishes...
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Date: 8/28/2018 2:58:00 PM
Spooky details and haunted imagery..you did well, nette. Best for a win.
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Date: 8/28/2018 2:19:00 PM
Very cool Nette. You have painted the eerie scene perfectly with your wonderful Acrostic
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Date: 8/28/2018 1:53:00 PM
well done, nette! very scary! best of luck in the contest...
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