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The Harmony of Percieving Colors (The Conclusion to Brians Contest)

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The Harmony of Percieving Colors (The Conclusion to Brians Contest)

All the colors that my eyes see
Seem to become a part of me

The red that bleeds my angry days
The gray that shades my darkest ways

The green forest that brings me ease
The purple tracks from my disease

Toni’s black outfit fills my nights
Faith is now my pillow of white

Colors lead to one conclusion
The rainbow is God’s illusion

Through the rainbow what my eyes see
I perceive immorality

For within the words that I write
The will in man to face the fight

To change his life and learn to be
A child of God proud and free

Everyone perceives, as they will
I can only write what I feel

I feel these colors in my soul
God’s rainbow leads to streets of gold

Of all I do and all I see
These colors bring me harmony

Harmonic balance brings me peace
For all my dreams are now in reach

Protected by the flaming sword
I accept Christ to be my Lord

Of all I do and all I feel
I am a servant to his will

It is the Lord who yields my pen
All the glory I give to him

In my words can you not perceive?
Gods rainbow truly brings me ease

Harmony now lives in my soul
See serving God has made me whole

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  1. Date: 10/8/2009 6:07:00 AM
    congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 10:25:00 AM
    Wonderful message, hot poem here. very inspirational!!

  1. Date: 10/3/2009 10:56:00 AM
    Colors do seem to evoke certain emotions - green serenity, blue coldness, red happiness or heat, etc. Indeed, you can "only write what (you) feel." And I love the concept of colors providing a "Harmonic balance that brings me peace." Very nice work, MJ! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/2/2009 8:17:00 AM
    Michael, congratulations on your first win in this most challenging contest. Your win was well-deserved. Yor poem is so heart-felt and inspiring. Prasing God, and living by His word is a commitment, which only a few make. And we don't have to wait to die to see His endless glory. God bless you and your loved ones. I wish more wins in future contests. Keep up the great work! Warmest regards, Andrew.

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 12:18:00 AM
    Glad you enjoyed the contest.A deserved winner.More powrer to your pen.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 12:53:00 PM
    Michael, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 12:52:00 PM
    You definitely know how to keep people wanting more! I think you could have gone a couple of more lines! Congratulations on your first place win! I love the praise and excitement of your testimony in this.

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 10:44:00 AM
    Michael, this is a beautiful and awesome write! Such a testimony is inspirational and brings us all hope! Congratulations on you first place win! Blessings, Donna

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 9:44:00 AM
    Michael..good for you! Wonderful happy for your win! BG

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 7:23:00 AM
    What beauty!!! And so well deserving of this 1st place in Brian's contest!! Congratulations Michael on this wonderful poem!!! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 6:09:00 AM
    A MASTERPIECE! dearest Michael. So spiritual and uplifting. Congratualtions on your first place win. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 3:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 1st place win in Brian's contest Michael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 1:37:00 AM
    CONGRATULATIONS!! First place in Brian's Contest! Enjoy the honor! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/30/2009 12:24:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in my contest Michael.Rgds Brian My latest contest Five&Twenty is now open.Please confirm a forwarding address for your prize

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 5:14:00 AM
    Michael, I wish you the best in Brian's contest. You seem to have grasped what he was looking for. Me I just couldn't get it together I don't think. Amazing write dear friend. Love, Carol YF4L

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 9:46:00 PM
    Wow! Brilliant work, Michael. Nice rhyme, flow and incredible images! Good luck in the contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 7:14:00 PM
    And you haven't been BLUE for a long time ... smile ... wonderful write here, Michael. I'm happy for you and your happiness radiates for us all. God Bless

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 5:45:00 PM
    Nicely penned couplet. I really like the third from the last stanza. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 5:27:00 PM
    Wonderfully written, Michael. Good luck in Brian's contest...and good luck at college...I hope it's going well. ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 5:10:00 PM
    Michael~A baring of the soul and true strength in your close relationship to God! Well done my friend! Love Laura :) Good luck in the contest!