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The Harmony of Dusk

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The mellow western sky darkened, The sea was calm that night, Yachts tacking across the bay Towards their appointed piers. Luminous moon rays shimmer Over wavelets that bathed The coloured pebbles Strewn all over the long shore. As night slowly fell I began my walk along the promenade. A soft breeze was a welcome to all Especially to the sailors that plied the bay In their sleek sailing boats Now tinged in red by the dying sun. Along the promenade, I met with friends A few words of salutation But I hurried on toward an ancient tower That once stood guard against pirates That invades the surroundings. Plundering and taking slaves with them. The Tower was now a restaurant, And there sat my love waiting for me. The breeze-blown brightness of her hair Seem to invite me to our destined tryst. She stood up and we embraced, A soft kiss on her wet lips. It was a promising beginning Of our night of love.

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/27/2023 10:08:00 PM

Another masterpiece, Victor. I loved the story and the romantic ending or perhaps the beginning of an endless love. WOW! Blessings.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/26/2023 3:16:00 PM

Oh I love that breeze blown brightness line. Awesome ending.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/25/2023 5:54:00 PM

I knew it! Victor-the-romantic displayed his true colours in the concluding stanza! Probably, you should retitle the poem as ‘Rapture at dusk’

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/25/2023 11:01:00 AM

This is a hot, memorable poem with an eye-opening view of a pirate island. Thank you for a lovely poem.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/25/2023 10:11:00 AM

Oh, Victor, I can feel the soft air, see the sail boats gliding across the bay and feel the sense of anticipation in every step! You have so beautifully set the scene for romance with a plethora of delightful details. Love the setting of the restaurant and its history. Indeed everything is in sync. So enjoyed this poem. Blessings.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/24/2023 8:49:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic with great imagery and feelings my friend. Many blessings and hugs

Yann Rolland

Date: 10/24/2023 4:50:00 PM

beautiful, and touching "tableau" , so well written, the melody of happiness resound in your words , this is a plce to remember, enjoyed, thanks poet

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/24/2023 4:40:00 PM

Victor, your poem is a beautiful and evocative piece of writing. It paints a vivid picture of a romantic evening at the seaside, with the setting sun, the moonlit sea, and the ancient tower all adding to the atmosphere. I particularly like the way you use language and imagery to create a sense of longing and anticipation. The "mellow western sky darkened" and the "sea was calm that night" suggest a sense of peace and tranquility, while the "yachts tacking across the bay" and the "luminous moon rays" evoke a sense of movement and mystery.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/24/2023 2:33:00 PM

so many beautiful images and emotions in your poem, Victor. I love the soft romance. So many wonderful lines. I liked 'the breeze-blown brightness of her hair.' Nicely done, Victor...enjoy your evening, Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/24/2023 12:07:00 PM

I love how this delightfully romantic tale is full of beautiful, nature scenes, Victor. Your story is wonderful throughout. This is a fave. :)

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/24/2023 12:14:00 PM

Thanks for the fave, my friend.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/24/2023 10:52:00 AM

You could write a romance novel Victor, and I'd sit riveted to the very end, Love this

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/24/2023 7:17:00 AM

Victor, your poetry is quite sophisticated. Every single detail is crystal vivid in my thoughts. This is also really touching. Setting the scene and describing the hopeful start to a night of passion.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2023 6:56:00 AM

This is absolutely stunning! How seamlessly your imagery flows, i love the opening lines the most and the way you’ve so descriptively played around with words articulating a very captivating poem. A night of love so passionately depicted, especially in your last lines that truly is soulful! So beautiful! Absolute pleasure reading this! Definitely a fave too for me

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/24/2023 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for the fave. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2023 6:28:00 AM

- Splendid harmony, Victor ... you embrace the feelings that come with the joy of love :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/24/2023 5:26:00 AM

Oh my, this poem is full of gorgeously heartwarming imagery and enriched with poetic splendour in myriad ways..your descriptions and pristine storytelling skills have really bewitched me, & also compelled to admire your creative phraseology.."Luminous moon rays shimmer Over wavelets that bathed The coloured pebbles Strewn all over the long shore","Now tinged in red by the dying sun","The breeze-blown brightness of her hair"That ending is glowing with magic, fabulously woven, dear Victor, a Fav!

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 10/24/2023 5:29:00 AM

Thanks for the fav. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/24/2023 5:14:00 AM

The harmony of dusk inspired your poetic line, Victor. Excellent details --I like the romantic touch!

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/24/2023 4:57:00 AM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/24/2023 4:06:00 AM

So much beauty in this poem Victor. I really can picture every moment of it in my mind. Very touching as well. Describing situations and the "promising beginning of a night of love", as you wrote in the last lines. Fantastic...! I also love the title given, well chosen as well as the picture. Have a great day Victor.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 10/24/2023 3:46:00 AM

Victor, I enjoyed your romantic poem, hugs.