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The Happy Poem

She held my hands and looked up at me, as I sat on the side of our bed. In the whispered voice, which was all she had left, this is what she said: “Write for me a happy poem - yours are often too sad; I know that my journey is done but for the life I had, I’m glad. I’m happy to be able to die at home; I’m happy all the kids are here; I’m happy to have been called your wife for all of fifty three years. I’m happy for the home we made; I’m happy for our grandchildren, too; I’m even happy for the troubles we had because they brought me closer to you. So do me a favor before I go and fall asleep for the final time; Take that magic pen of yours and write me a happy rhyme.” As my tears dropped on the paper and mixed with the ink of my fountain pen, I tried writing for her a happy poem, so her journey to heaven could begin.
The angels smiled upon us When they put you in our life The happiest day I have ever known Was when you said you’d be my wife Everyone that you ever met Was blessed by your happiness A gift that we will keep passing on As God is our witness Heaven will be a happier place After calling you back home And knowing you’re smiling down upon us We will never feel all alone Thank you for inspiring us To always see the happy side With your laughter and your giddiness And a smile that was always wide Your passing brings us sorrow But just for a week or two Forever after we will always smile Remembering the happiness that was you
May not qualify as a happy, "Happy Poem" - but, the phrase, "Write Me A Happy Poem" brought this out of me. by Joe Flach - written and posted on 11/1/11 for Francine's contest

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Date: 1/6/2012 6:03:00 PM
Beatiful and moving. WOW..
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Date: 11/24/2011 11:44:00 PM
Definatally amazing Joe!!=]
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:05:00 PM
A unique style and entry, Joe! I enjoyed this one from you.
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Write me a Happy Poem" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:29:00 PM
Wow. This one touched me because my wife always says to me "how come you never write happy poems". Congrats on your HM Joe
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Date: 11/7/2011 8:20:00 PM
Congrats Joe on HM in the happy poem contest luv ..enjoy special honor for excellence ...
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Date: 11/7/2011 6:36:00 PM
I could not put it in the top ten Joe , I just couldn't , it isn't happy, its sad, almost made me cry, but I had to give it an HM because its fantastic and I want everyone to read it
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Date: 11/7/2011 5:58:00 PM
And it qualifies highly. We can find the happiness between the rain clouds when the sun comes out. Congratulations Joe. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:51:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL!! Brought tears to my eyes. Happy tears, that is. Your heart pours forth inspirational words. And so tenderly and gracefully too! Always, Laura
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Date: 11/1/2011 11:14:00 PM
Awesome write. I think this is a happy poem because you did the greatest thing... to honor her wish and make her smile before the Angels took her away. This is definitely a winner in my book
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Date: 11/1/2011 3:30:00 PM
wow! this poem is very beautiful and heartfelt. it really touched me. it may not be a traditional "happy" poem, but i think it will bring much joy to all who read it.
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Date: 11/1/2011 2:04:00 PM
I so enjoyed reading your beautiful poem today Joe - losing someone brings tears of many kinds, good luck in the competition, love Janette
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Date: 11/1/2011 1:54:00 PM
So beautiful, Joe. There are happy tears, mixed with tears of loss and remembrance...but how could one not smile after reading with wet eyes?
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