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The Hands of Time

As Palm Readers know hands reveal Just look at the life line There all is said; a controlled life 'Tis written down in time As the dish towel washes stains Dirt 'pon cabinet doors Placed there by a much larger hand Hands scrub grease 'pon the floor Sand through the hour glass flows faster Time runs out for those hands Can fate be changed the last hour Now hands not held by bands Uplifting the current flowing The course sand now stands still From a heart of love all 'twas gifted Not control but love's will Finis'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/9/2014 3:48:00 PM
Sounds like a loved one being freed from the grip of a controlling relationship, a powerful poem Sara, thanks for sharing. Loved the finishing stanzas.
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Date: 1/6/2014 8:51:00 AM
Enjoyed aND WILL WAIT FOR THE FULL VERSION, SARA
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Date: 1/6/2014 7:18:00 AM
Already inspiring and moving Sara ..
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Date: 1/5/2014 7:10:00 PM
seems like it is leading to something very profound, dear!!
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Date: 1/5/2014 6:24:00 PM
waiting, wondering! :) Light & Love
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Date: 1/5/2014 2:13:00 PM
This is a great beginning to an awesome write my friend! I look real forward to finishing this poem when it is completed! What a glorious piece, Awesome Work!!
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Date: 1/5/2014 10:32:00 AM
So far this is shaping up to be a great poem. That larger hand does indeed place dirt so that we can learn how to scrub it up. Certainly interested to see more on this one Sara.
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Date: 1/5/2014 9:31:00 AM
very interesting, sara...heart line, destiny line included? ... let me know when you're done; can hardly wait to be surprised!.. huggs
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