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The night air flowed over my breath The covers not quite keeping me warm Dreams caressing my past My lover whispers in my ear Sweet words, with her loving touch Times long ago, where tenderness would flow Her perfume flys away with the wind Happy days my only true possessions ahhh but love is not as it once was Age makes the windmill turn slower My lover caressing my pain Raindrops falling, aroused in the wet rain She my life, now I live with thoughts inane Shivering, She releases me from both pleasure and pain Dreams of her splatter all over on top My cover only a cardboard box Wet from the weather in the alley where I sleep At dawn, there is a sharp pain in my rib "out your bum, get the hell away" Kicked and bruised I grab what I can All I can think of is to run run run Limping, onwards to the park I feel a firm hand take hold of me Stop young man, its raining cant you see? Shocked I try to escape, fear invades me In a softer tone the man says Come with me son, out of the rain The shelter is over there, close to your park A warm meal, and and fresh bath will do you good Father O'Brien pats the new one Davey on the back Welcome son, here's a book if you care to read Davey still in skeptical mode, being treated as human Father O'Brien see this in his heavy eyes He looks at Davey and whispers I was once you, you see The hand of love Can mend a thousand hearts When like the seeds of blooming flowers We spread the love we were handed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/9/2017 11:59:00 PM
Arthur this I will make a favorite. One of my top favorites from you. This one should go into the Best Of Poetry Soup.. ..
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Date: 10/8/2017 3:28:00 AM
Back to say Congrats on POTD, happy for you....Maria
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:16:00 PM
Arthur, I love this touching piece. Congratulations on receiving POTD. :)
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Date: 10/7/2017 5:39:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...POTD!!!...yahoo!...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:18:00 PM
- As always a wonderful poem ... congratulations, Arthur !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2017 1:47:00 PM
Tender pen my friend, congratulations :) xomo
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Date: 10/7/2017 12:34:00 PM
This is so clutching I don't know how you wrote it without personal experience, but I suppose you did. It will be a favorite of mine. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/7/2017 11:42:00 AM
This poem really touched my heart, congratulations.
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Date: 10/7/2017 11:14:00 AM
Back to say well done and congratulations...
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Date: 10/7/2017 10:59:00 AM
Fantastic, congratulations on POTD Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 10/7/2017 9:28:00 AM
simply stunning POTD thank you
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Date: 10/7/2017 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations Arthur
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Date: 10/7/2017 9:14:00 AM
Arthur, After reading this I need your help! Your poetic punch floored me! Poetry meets reality and love blooms! Please accept my congratulations and admiration. My best to you. chuck
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:55:00 AM
I'm back again to congratulation you Arthur on POTD honors for you awesome write!
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Date: 10/7/2017 6:55:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Arthur. It was a pleasure to begin my day with your uplifting poem.
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Date: 10/7/2017 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on the POTD :)
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:59:00 AM
hey the three musky tears are on a roll and getting POTD lol:-) Many congrats Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2017 2:38:00 AM
Love it Art. PotD my friend, grats!
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Date: 10/6/2017 9:01:00 PM
Such a beautiful and powerful write Arthur about compassion and hope for those less fortunate among us and the special and rare people that initiate that compassion and hope. Well done!
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Date: 10/6/2017 8:34:00 AM
Love it Arthur...we need more
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Date: 10/6/2017 2:52:00 AM
So true, Art <3
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Date: 10/6/2017 2:30:00 AM
Bravo Arthur, very powerfully penned. The issue of homelessness is huge and even though we have no visibly homeless on the Island there is a growing number of 'couch surfers' I agree that we need more like father O'Brien and safe houses where they can get themsleves on their feet (the risk of taking a stranger into your home is great - there was a double murder recently in the UK:-(:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/5/2017 11:30:00 PM
There are too few people like this Father O'Brien.... Great write my friend.
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Date: 10/5/2017 10:35:00 PM
Such a reassuring write Arthur, well done...
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