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The Hall

Fruit-colored cubes Vertex-based orbital spin March to the kitchen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/30/2009 5:03:00 AM
Can Haiku be any better! Wow.
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Date: 6/6/2009 7:47:00 PM
awesome!!!
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Date: 6/4/2009 10:00:00 PM
Very nice, Cesar! Perhaps you were thinking of fruit as you made your way to the kitchen? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2009 1:15:00 PM
Reminds me of plums. Thanks!
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Date: 6/1/2009 4:25:00 PM
You've got me smiling your creative use of imagery. Enjoyed the last line. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 6/1/2009 12:51:00 PM
Nicely done! - jeremiah
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Date: 6/1/2009 5:26:00 AM
I'd like to experience this hall. You make the simplest things crazy interesting! Love, Shar
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