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The Hall

Fruit-colored cubes
Vertex-based orbital spin
March to the kitchen

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  1. Date: 6/30/2009 5:03:00 AM
    Can Haiku be any better! Wow.

  1. Date: 6/6/2009 7:47:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/4/2009 10:00:00 PM
    Very nice, Cesar! Perhaps you were thinking of fruit as you made your way to the kitchen? Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/3/2009 1:15:00 PM
    Reminds me of plums. Thanks!

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 4:25:00 PM
    You've got me smiling your creative use of imagery. Enjoyed the last line. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 12:51:00 PM
    Nicely done! - jeremiah

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 5:26:00 AM
    I'd like to experience this hall. You make the simplest things crazy interesting! Love, Shar