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The Guiding Light

When my world grows dim, I trust the guiding light. At times the world seems a lie, with nothing to believe. Against a darkened sky a single flame burns bright. Facts can obscure the truth when handled with slight, for there is one among us who is working to deceive. When my world grows dim, I trust the guiding light. When I can't be certain of my left hand from my right, because for all my years I'm still foolish and naive, Against a darkened sky a single flame burns bright. Weary from the battle though I think it worth the fight to strengthen what remains for those here when I leave. When my world grows dim, I trust the guiding light. Stumbling in the darkness for faulty is my sight, watching unravel before us more than we've achieved. Against a darkened sky a single flame burns bright. Afraid I have not the faith to walk when finally night, I hear the familiar whisper, "only receive." When my world grows dim, I trust the guiding light. Against a darkened sky a single flame burns bright.

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Date: 12/4/2018 10:19:00 AM
I enjoyed reading , P.S. , very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination . Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/4/2018 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Eve :)
Date: 11/25/2018 5:33:00 AM
This reminds me so of Dylan Thomas' famous villanelle, 'Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night'. It's as good as his! It's also my favorite form. THANK you!
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Date: 11/25/2018 8:21:00 AM
It was my first attempt with it. I am glad you liked my poem. You are too kind. :)
Date: 11/17/2018 10:16:00 AM
This is quite beautiful. I, too, trust the guiding light. Congratulations on your win in the contest. My best. Deb
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Date: 11/17/2018 10:58:00 AM
thank you, deb for your visit and kind words :)
Date: 11/11/2018 7:32:00 PM
Well done, PS. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/11/2018 8:04:00 PM
thanks Line :)
Date: 11/8/2018 11:49:00 PM
Congratulations on hour wonderful win P.S. : )
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Date: 11/9/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thank you, Connie :)
Date: 11/8/2018 6:36:00 PM
Your verses express how I feel most days. Well said and congratulations. Thanks for your entry.
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Date: 11/8/2018 6:40:00 PM
Janis thank you for your visit and kind words and for challenging us with your contest :)
Date: 11/2/2018 4:15:00 AM
I had never really thought about what "A guiding light" meant. I always just thought "boring soap opera" before, but now you have enlightened me and entertained. Great job!
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Date: 11/2/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Caren :)
Date: 11/2/2018 3:10:00 AM
- A wonderful writing ... it is always worth fighting - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise :)
Date: 11/1/2018 10:45:00 PM
I enjoyed your beautiful lines, there impact enhanced in this form. It is a fun form to conquer and you did so. Much profound feel in this write that I'm sure most can relate to, I know I did. Best of luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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Date: 11/1/2018 11:15:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay, for your visit and encouragement :)
Date: 11/1/2018 10:04:00 PM
I find your poem, "The Guiding Light", so refreshing! For as the world turns I see less and less of the bold and the beautiful in the world. Even the young & the restless struggle to find meaning in it. -Richard
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Date: 11/1/2018 10:06:00 PM
you are so clever Richard :) thank you for the visit!

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